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Voted For: CA$per

Underestimating my skill you bitch... you better save your health,
And you're the elevation leader? bitch you need to elevate yourself,
bad choice to use this as a opener, but a nice personals

Subtract the dolla sig, your broke, ya know ya ain't stashin the bills,
My styles 'SKI' cause to beat you I only gotta use half of my skills,*
eh, couldve been worded wayy better, but descent

This is one unfortunate event, think ya win with ya raps your crazy,
Man you need to 'get ghost', like you was hittin on patrick swayze,**
I understand it, but i wasnt feelin this. pretty wack right here

Retaliatin in the same degree is rare, ya think cause i sin im evil,
ya ain't that sharp but i know you slept on like pins and needles,***
eh, not all that...couldve been better

ya can do whatever when they vote, who has the most numbers?
when you this bitch Casper, who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!
terrible closer

your lines were organized very poorly, but you did have some nice punches and personals in there. I think you were forcing too many punches to sound good and thats why they came out all un-organized and flowed off. a pretty nice verse, but i dont know bout it

ca$per verse:

Hey one step pull up yo skirt,cause yo ass is fruity like jello dessert…
Your fukkin record says enough,it proves u soft like marshmello fluff….
hmm..first line sounded like it was guna be a dope bar. bad opener

U talk shit like your dope,but im really not impressed….
U declined against saber,left that one unadressed….
not lookin good for you right now..eh, not a good bar at all

3-3 dog and u people in your crew say your tha man……
then why u payin for yer crew forum in an installment plan?....
heating up i see...nice personal/punch. nice bar

it takes u 2 hourz to drop a weak comeback that is trash....
want a real cumback?fart and look at your ass......
pretty descent. not tha best worded bar i seen, but not tha worse

this verse was ight. I was more interested in this one than tha other. I guess cause this one was comical. Nice punches and personals. Bad first half of verse, but then you picked it up. I think your verse was more structure and organized and I think it flowed better. I give you my vote.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

One sided battle..

OneSTepBeyond - Pretty good drop here, haha liked the closer was funny shit...had a nice flow to your verse, the punches were good and original...some good personals and some nice metas...good vocabulary...haha the patrick swayze punch...good shit, and i liked the elevation line too...nice verse.....7/10

CA$per - your verse wasn't that great...the first line was weak as hell, the second bar was an okay personal, not that great...the installment plan line wasn't that good...was really forced too...the closer was played as fuck...gay/sex jokes are weak...also, don't label opener, and closer...people are stupid...it's not hard to figure out...verse could use elevation...5/10

Vote: OneStepBeyond

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checkin dem pollsssssss...................................

red bull=tha sorrow=beef vote or hate vote..............

Not it really isn't, I hate OneStepBeyond since he was in NOK...you're both faggots...just voting on what I thought...Hahaha I read all the votes in here...wow it's all dick riders...my vote was honest...he merked you...

How is every vote a D/R vote? I don't get it. I wouldnt doubt that OSB would keep all those votes anyway, because his crew don't know how to click feedback.

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Vote-One Step

Explanation: His punches hit way more hard and it seemed he came more personal in his verse .. caspers in all honesty kinda seemed lame in this .. seen better from u casper

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB took this battle imo
casper-your verse was too simple no complexity at all...and your rhymes was basic...your opener was kind of weak...didnt really rhyme...and to me your opener has to be atleast decent to catch the readers eye.......
OSB-you had a more complexity to your verse and ur punches were more creative and hit harder....the ghostbusters thing was kind of funny it would have been a lot better if you re-worded it....u had a couple personals...and the ski thing was creative also i wasnt even thinkin like dat when u said that.....so my vote goes to.....one step beyond

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Underestimating my skill you bitch... you better save your health,
And you're the elevation leader? bitch you need to elevate yourself,
6...been done already but aight!!
Subtract the dolla sig, your broke, ya know ya ain't stashin the bills,
My styles 'SKI' cause to beat you I only gotta use half of my skills,*
7...clever 2nd line, 1st line was an aight personal!!
This is one unfortunate event, think ya win with ya raps your crazy,
Man you need to 'get ghost', like you was hittin on patrick swayze,**
7...LMAO!!! funny shit!! nice personal again!!
Retaliatin in the same degree is rare, ya think cause i sin im evil,
ya ain't that sharp but i know you slept on like pins and needles,***
7...i understand, dope line!!!
ya can do whatever when they vote, who has the most numbers?
when you this bitch Casper, who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!
9...LMFAO!!!! hottest line in ya verse!!!

OVERALL: 36/50 (72%)


Opener….
Hey one step pull up yo skirt,cause yo ass is fruity like jello dessert…
Your fukkin record says enough,it proves u soft like marshmello fluff….
5...nah!!! not feelin it and ya rhymin was not good either!!
U talk shit like your dope,but im really not impressed….
U declined against saber,left that one unadressed….
6...better but still weak!!
3-3 dog and u people in your crew say your tha man……
then why u payin for yer crew forum in an installment plan?....
7...HA!! nice line!!
closer….
it takes u 2 hourz to drop a weak comeback that is trash....
want a real cumback?fart and look at your ass......
7...LMAO!!! another funny line!!

OVERALL:25/40 (62.5%)

OneStep gets this battle with harder punches and more clever and funny personals. that ghostbusters closer was fuckin funny as hell!!!!!

RTF!!! on one of my battles!! links in siggy!!!

This was feedback posted for CA$per
 

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB:

Underestimating my skill you bitch... you better save your health,
And you're the elevation leader? bitch you need to elevate yourself,
^^ehh 3/10
Subtract the dolla sig, your broke, ya know ya ain't stashin the bills,
My styles 'SKI' cause to beat you I only gotta use half of my skills,*
^^nice bar 7/10
This is one unfortunate event, think ya win with ya raps your crazy,
Man you need to 'get ghost', like you was hittin on patrick swayze,**
^^decent meta 4/10
Retaliatin in the same degree is rare, ya think cause i sin im evil,
ya ain't that sharp but i know you slept on like pins and needles,***
^^lol nice 8/10
ya can do whatever when they vote, who has the most numbers?
when you this bitch Casper, who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!
^^lol 5/10

Overall: 27/50 (54%)

Ca$per:

Hey one step pull up yo skirt,cause yo ass is fruity like jello dessert…
Your fukkin record says enough,it proves u soft like marshmello fluff….
^^no and no 5/20
U talk shit like your dope,but im really not impressed….
U declined against saber,left that one unadressed….
^^no 2/10
3-3 dog and u people in your crew say your tha man……
then why u payin for yer crew forum in an installment plan?....
^^lol decent 5/10
it takes u 2 hourz to drop a weak comeback that is trash....
want a real cumback?fart and look at your ass......
^^wtf 3/10

Overall: 15/50 (30%)

Vote: OSB