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uppin this battle for more votes dammit....i'm hungry lol

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This was feedback posted for LFS The Great
 

i dunno, thought LFS's verse was funnier....both ya'll need to stop with the self-glor though, that hurts your verses

keep up

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up da battle also LFS
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bitch i do what I want when i want lol...besides this doesnt realy matter anyway...i could care less who wins to tell the truth....

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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

LyricalMa$tamind
You lacked in an opener. Middle was full of funny and hard hits! Some of it sounded forced and lines could of been worded a little better. Funny closer and hard hit. Overall I give this a %75. I know you got better in you!

LFS The Great
You had the making for some good personals but the hits werent hard enough. You had some decent wordplay. Some stuff I just wasn't feeling... like the GEICO line.

Vote: LyricalMa$tamind

*Just honest opinion*

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