This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

I can't call it... first time i ever got stumped voting on a battle...damn... hot ass drops from verse ... both on point from beginning to end... sorry y'all... gotta call it a draw...oh yeah... definitely best battle i've read in a while!!!!!

its aiight
dont vote.....
i won already regardless to what happens now...
read my 1st line.......

lol....fam would like 2 battle ofline...4 nothin less than 500 bills??

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

All my votes are Liable.......cause you be snitching for Survival
Marv dropped so many dimes, he got a bank account with 5-0
6...aight decent opener, get things crackin!!!
So of course marv J "runshit"....... he too broke for a Whip!!
Da last time u hopped on anything dat move, was Strobe Dick
5...nah man!!!! that strobe shit is old and been done before on other ppl!!
Ha! Im starving to play, cuz on da ball court u are what u Say
Ya shots miss on the net, Ive always owned a 'Marvolous JAy'
7...decent shit!! 2nd line was dope!!
I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell
Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L"
6...decent line, but them lines talkin bout sumone gettin the "L" are gettin old to!!
U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em
U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done
8...LMAO!!! this was a dope bar!!!
So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak
Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep
8...hot personal, dope closer!!

OVERALL: 40/60


im 2 sick,and u bitch!..i just got a new 5th so fam a few clips.
a hit a head n leave u like da "yankee's when babe died","roof-less".*ruth*
7...gud opener, nice meta!!
type of guns i hold make kops-get-scared,chill! ya not-sick-quer.
he raps like "nelly" ppl came da see marv spit no1 cares if "HOT in here"*
8...hotness...a fuckin dope personal!!
no1 stopin dis bastard!,u lyin 2 ppl on rv hot ur an actress go hop in a casket.
u wouldn't have a "buzz in da hood" if u put ya "intercom on da top of ya jacket".
7...decent again, throwin in a little multi to!!
dis fagget lie's!...talkin bout in da bronx he shoot his gun & be stabin guy's.
put jay in ya PaRa-graph PaRa-medics gon tell ya moms her boy's PaRa-lized.
7...dopeness!!! that para shit was hot!!
vets think ur still a noob who wants dis dick in a crew,he does alot of bickerin 2.
u spit with da flu?,no u "da medicine man" well i know "women sicker" than u.
6...a played concept man but u made it gud!!!
couldn't "see marv" on his "bp page",im cool u dont wanna c-me-rage.
u'll neva get on da radio usin ya "demo as a frisby" a be da only time ya "Cd-plays"
7...decent closer with them metas again!!

OVERALL: 42/60

Yo, this was a fuckin dope battle........both came hard and shit but Marv takes it for hotter personals and better wordplay. overall he came more consistent and a little harder than hotshh!

V/ - MaRVJay1009

Return the favour on this battle plz!!!!

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aye....wtf....RTF niggAs..........................I'm on tha front page!

All my votes are Liable.......cause you be snitching for Survival
Marv dropped so many dimes, he got a bank account with 5-0
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uppin 5-3

Voted For: hotshh!

marv...
had a hot opener but a crappy second bar...third bar had a good set up and funny punch...forth bar was good wordplay but set up was whack...fifth bar was worded bad n wasnt funny....closer was good but really stretched

hot...
opener should have had better rhyme but it was funny...2nd bar was fuck hurtful...in a good way...third bar was funny as hell once i got it...forth bar was a hard fuckin personel wit ghetto word play...fifth bar was good punchbut dont get gassed...closer made sence but it was very plain to read...
but overall hotshh! had better flow,peresonels, punches,and structure...

vote hotshh!

lmao.. i bet he gonna get the vote DQ'd.. seriously.. this guy can't take a lost...

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

.................................................. ....... checkin polls

i hope not..........................................
that was short but explained.....please leave it alone
you want explaination, he gave it to you

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

checkin pollz, idk who won, its split to me///////

lol yo hot fam now i really think ur gay ...u voted 4 typical in me n his battle..and he votes 4 u in me n ur battle...lol....funny shit but when u ready da stop bein a bitch and battle me offline holla

u cant be serious......
this battle should be closed
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u can beat everybody else.....u cant fuck with me....at all

in multis... nope
in KLL, ill be up for championship youll watch
in korv, YOU WONT LAST...
and you dqing all my votes proved my 1st bar....snitching for survival
i merk you hands down......
leave it alone....i liked your style.
but it aint fucking with me
dont start no gay beef with me
you shoulda blacklisted typ like i shoulda blacklisted flow
we even.....
no matter if u win or lose, we both know i won....leave it alone

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

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pretty hot battle here, yall both came with some nice drops
but ima go wit MarvJay on this one. I was feelin his verse more, it was more complex, and easy to understand at the same time. Plus the punches in his joint were better in my mind and hit harder.

Marv Jay- nice verse from you, you really brought that fire in this battle. some pretty good punches, and really nice multies helpd ya verse flow real well. had some good creative lines in there makin ya shit more thorough sounding
*Marv Jays best bar*=
no1 stopin dis bastard!,u lyin 2 ppl on rv hot ur an actress go hop in a casket.
u wouldn't have a "buzz in da hood" if u put ya "intercom on da top of ya jacket".
^^hot shit, my fav bar of your verse good delivery n erething

hotshh!-pretty good verse from you, didn't like ya opener tho, and some of your punches didn't really land. you had decent-good flow and nice structure. could have come harder wit some better multies tho, maybe that woulda upped ya verse's quality a lil more. but overall pretty good verse from you.
*hotshh! best bar*=
I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell
Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L"
^i liked this punch, nice set up and goo delivery, hit pretty hard

overal=marv got my verse, his punches was just hittin harder and i liked his multies better. good shit from both
PLEASE HIT ME BACK!! return the favor, links are in theSIG