This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 

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Voted For: Young Blaze

IIght...

YB:

Verse was nice, I have seen much better from you, but you still dropped a pretty decent verse...Only thing I really didnt like was how a couple lines were stretched, which fucked up the flow in some spots. However, you had nice personals, good wordplay, and were consistent with your punches. Therefore, you get my vote.

Black Queen:

Again, this was not your best. I felt that you fell off because you lacked hard-hitting punches, which is not a normal thing for you. Personals were not there, and the wordplay was mediocre at best. I was surprised at your verse.

V/ Young Blaze

Voted For: Young Blaze

When I spit, I even make the "ground sick" like I "puked on rubble”
Cuz Tikz will just "silence ya clique"(click) like "muting seat buckles
Shove my fist through her gums make em hand me her chewins
Queen is ruined i'll "open her chest" and leave her"showing more heart" than a "Family Reunion”….
Any 1 of yall Boys Come Disarm Me holdin them Toys Than Point Em And Harm Me…
yall never Grew-Nuts, i'll leave ya `CREW-CUT,` like `T.J.` was Joinin Da Army…(the jury)
Rippin threw yah blouse’s,Queens body parts found In Couches.
Leave Her “Scared Ta Post” Like “Fence Builders”Near Haunted House’s….
Make Black lose it when I spray flame leave this lame Ho useless…
U can hate..but I'll stay ahead of "B" like Straight "A" Students….

Yo Dem Punz Wuz Fiyah Dawg, Real Good Flow, Nice Hard Hittin Wordplay, Everythin Wuz Witty & On Point, Cant Be Faulted Dawgy, Dope Verse


Most of your battle are with Newbies and Wack Emcees
you lack plenty, hold no Punches like a Pitcher that's half empty
You ain't got PHAT shit your verse is Stretch like a FAT kid
i rap quick, call you Warm-Up cuz you need more Practice
and my punches are like music..they leave lasting re-percussions
And when vets talk of his skills..its all ancient history discussions
and to tell your the truth, you aren't really my homie
i'll break your legs, and get you to walk man, like sony
so i'll break you off easy, and you'd better be left dead
watch me drop knowledge on him, and hope it hits his head

Iight, U Had Sum Good Stuff Gurl, Pretty Decent Rhymez, It Wuzza Lil Basic, Nuthin' Caught My Eye, Need 2 Come Wid Better Wordplay & More Creative Pun'z

Vote/ Y.B

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