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MaRVJay 05-12-05 07:43 AM

Voted For: Big City

big city:
What u want wit me, fool? ,man ...this dude can get it
cuz all ya punches is "fallin short" like abusive midgets
^^^DA RYHME SCHEME ON DIS BAR WAS GOOD BUT DA PUNCH WAS WACK
this fat dyke named ackrite, betta keep his yap tight,
or get both "cheeks" slashed twice, like he got an ass bite
^^^MULTIS N FLOW WERE DOPE....BUT DATZ IT
dog, pitch ya trash mic, n save all that cash, that you prolly spent
or them slugs,will hum n will stick ya gums like its poly- dent
^^^WHOOO I LIKE DIS BAR...DOPE PUNCH/MULTIS
this bitch is kinda moody yall, he gay he's prolly scoopin balls
Sittin on ya cellphone, is the only time u got a "booty call"
^^^LMAOOOOOOOO VERY THOUGHTFUL N CLEVA
smoke this clown's wig, you small, you just a pound kid
and you aint Guerilla Black, so stop trynna sound "B.i.g"
^^NAH DIS LINE IS PLAYED NOW I SAID DIS BOUT A COUPLE MONTHS AGO
this five-0 snictch, will find it "tuff ta hide" like a Rhino pic
im finding ya verse "hard to swallow" like the Schivo chick...its nothin
^^^^DECENT CLOSER...DA PUNCH WAS OKAY


ackrite:
Bigcity Lacks Wins, Guess Battlin A Newbie Will Obtain U Glory
His 'Definition Of Hard' Is Illiterate, He Only 'Reads When Horny'
^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN IT
Stupid All Ya Records Say Zero...Can't Even Master As Editer
Super Hero From Maryland?....Nigga Your No 'Captain America'
^^^DA CAPTAIN AMERICA PART WAS WACK..BUT EVERYTHING ELSE WAS OKAY
Your Votes Form More Rings Than Froot Loops And Tucan Sam
You Less Likely To 'Beat Me'…Then A Prostitute With No Hands!
^^DECENT PUNCH...NOTHIN SPECIAL
Citys Strategies Flawed..So Ill Punch Ya Til Ur Inner Cavity Falls
& Uppercut You So High..You'll Be Defying ALL Of Gravity's Laws!
^^^I WAS FEELIN DIS EVEN THO GRAVITY LINES R OLD...I LIKE DA FLOW ON DIS SHIT
Son Ya Raps Are Worthless, 'Purple & White' Avy? Da Worse Mix
Cuz Ur Verse Is Only 'On Point' If Ur Tryin To Be Wack On Purpose
^^WEAK CLOSER....


V/BIG CITY.....he came with some hott shit...noth of u started off kind of weak but then picked it up but city turned up more....

Big City 05-12-05 04:21 PM

thanks for the honest feedback, marv uppin this joint

AckRite 05-12-05 05:15 PM

BLAH.............................................. .............Uppin

Dirty Nigga 05-13-05 07:01 AM

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 
checkin the pollz....maybe a little biased 'cause you fam, but you should have this one on lock....

Dirty Nigga 05-13-05 07:02 AM

lol
wtf @ 2-1 down, thats unexpected.......how did that happen?! LOL..

Big City 05-13-05 04:02 PM

thanks for the honest feedback, marv uppin this joint

Big City 05-14-05 12:22 AM

thanks for the honest feedback, marv uppin this joint

Big City 05-14-05 09:03 AM

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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Big City 05-14-05 07:00 PM

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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Big City 05-15-05 12:33 AM

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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Big City 05-15-05 11:11 AM

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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Big City 05-15-05 05:31 PM

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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Big City 05-15-05 10:14 PM

uppin this battle right here, lets get some votes in this bitch
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josh654789 05-15-05 10:26 PM

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 
you got some nice lines, your stuffs pretty good....i cant vote yet, im workin on it... but my vote goes to you


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