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Voted For: Re~Verb

This guy wanted to elevate, ok he thought, nows my chance
Told to attempt slant rhymes, so he addopted a backward stance
Wanted to dance, but he lacks stability like a flatpacked shelf
Was gonna try get personal, but his rhymes speak for themself
Theirs no need to hit him hard, hell..hes started crumbling already
Told him just to spit whenever, because he`ll never be ready
Already ya merked, u cnt spit gangsta,mommys boy ya too good
Type to mess wit car engines, in an attept to be "in tha hood"
Drag ya name through the mud, but its that long itll take me 4eva
The sayings wrong, coz this experience wnt bring us "closer 2getha"**


Good Verse, Flow Wuz Rite On Point An EZ 2 Follow, Da Punchez Made They Mark On Da Battle & Da Opener Had Me Lyke ''Oooh'' U Wrapped It Up In Dat Bar Alone, Good Job

On this microphone i can't be beat,
i treat re-verb like his signature and 'hand' him defeat/
Cuz i'm sick on the mic and and nice when we go textual,
And if this dude hates my knife swings across his face both ways like a bisexual/
I dun know what dude u heard about,
Cuz when them things come out, this dude's face will 'change' just like what in your couch/
Niggas say they ain't feelin me cuz i scare them have they face white like chalk,
Dun get mad cuz i had your girl and pulled out my 'Lexington Steele' and made her 'booty talk'/
This nigga dun have the heart, how you make it to the top of the charts?,/
i'll run up on you in the dark, with the sumthin sharp, put it to where you think you smart, and then kill a different member of your family every week like Kenny on Southpark/

Yo Verse Started Wit Lyke 5 Words In'a Line, Den 2wardz Da End, U Had Like 25 Wordz In'a Line, Whuzzup Wit Dat? Fix Yo Structure, But Yo Lyrikal Content Wuz Kinda Weak Wit Played Out Punchez, Plz Dont Hate, I'm Jus Telling It How I C It

Vote/ Re~Verb, Much Better Lyrikal Quality

Return Da Vote In Mah Battlez In Da Signature Plz

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Voted For: Re~Verb

Vote: Re~Verb

Verb your punchs were harder. Flow was much better, wordplay was much better. Good vocabulary. Your opener and closer could of been a little better.

data first of all your structure was bad...no hate... just work on that a little... the "hand him.." line is mad played... a lot of your bars are stretched.


no hate just honest opinion