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Capone 05-15-05 08:48 PM

Voted For: Armada Da 187

ight here is sum quick feed

armanda- came good with punches good flow and structure....i think you came harder at ack then ack did to you

ack- ight not bad it was a ok verse....but you have to come harder on punches...i think thats what made aramda win...but it was ok keep elevating


v/ armada

AckRite 05-15-05 10:39 PM

FUCK DAT.............This Battle Is Gettin Closed..............& I Think Your Armada Also^

ARMADA STOP FUCKIN VOTIN 4 YASELF BITCH!...You Have No Life Or Confidence In Yaself If You Gotta Make Alias's & Vote For Yaself....Get Real....Dis Is Gettin Closed & I Hope They Fuckin BAN You

Prickz These Days..SMH

Topical 05-16-05 12:29 AM

Voted For: AckRite

ack-aiight you got my vote cuz your had harder hitting punches........your structure was a lil messed up only cuz your font size tho.....so next time dont make it soo big........your vocab was basic......try adding more complex words.......little to no multis, work on puttin some in to help flow.......your flow was decent even tho u had no multis......not and personals......try incorperating some into your verse.....but overall good solid drop
7-10

arm-aiight your verse was a lil weak......some of your punches needd to be worded better for them to hit harder.......but some were good and a lil humerous....its nice to see a lil humor........you had one really stretched line........so it kinda hurt the good structure you had going.....not good vocab...work on uppin that....not really any personals.....so yeh work on puttin some of them in......flow was aiight a lil choppy tho....work on multis to help that out........but decent drop..you've done better tho
5-10


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