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AckRite 05-20-05 07:30 PM

Aha @ Sorrow...........You A Crazy Dude Lol............But Lets Get Some Votes Niggaz

p4ntzistheish 05-20-05 08:19 PM

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 
lol Sorrow...that close was genious lol...and Ack...we HAVE to battle...u set it p whenever wherever...nice battle

.Poetic. 05-21-05 12:50 AM

^ Thanks for the feed yo..

Yo, AckRite fa'real though, good battle man...

Ike 05-21-05 01:32 AM

Voted For: The Sorrow

ummm damn...The Sorrow killed Ack......both had good drops...but i felt sorrow came harder...he had some nice punches that just hit a lot harder....Ack you had a pretty solid verse...but nothing witty enough to take this win man...Sorrow just came with the wittyness...and he played off of so many different things...it easily got the win for him...so sorrow takes this with harder hitting punches.....and wittyness.....good verses from both

BiZzO 05-21-05 02:33 AM

Voted For: The Sorrow

aiiight first all good battle yo, i liked both of ur verses to a certain extent... aiight lets break it down...

Sorrow - your opener was pretty good, closer was also a nice one... your whole verse flowed all the way through, i didnt fall of point anywhere... your vocabulary was very good, didnt genralise at all, your punches were hard hittin and you had me chucklin with some of em... personals were good at least u did some reaserch.... and ur structure was good and creativity was dope....
fav bar... "This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?" 8.5/10

AckRite - aiight lets go, your opener was pretty good, but ur closer was a bit of a let down, your verse flowed well but some things were a bit hard to understand the way u werded them... but overall that was aiight, your vocabulary was pretty dope, you used some realli good words... ok ur punches were aiight a few that were sorta played out, and could have been better... your structure was very good and your creativity was good...
fav bar... "Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!" overall 7.5/10

opener - Ackrite
closer - Sorrow
flow - Sorrow
punches - Sorrow
vocab - AckRite
structure - AckRite
creativity - Sorrow
personals - Sorrow
enjoyment - Sorrow
overall - Sorrow, no hate just how i saw it...

Carlton Banks 05-21-05 10:21 AM

Voted For: The Sorrow

the sorrow..
AckRite you front thug, but we all know that your faking son...
Just look at the emcee in your sig...wait a sec...there isn't one
6/10..coulv'e worded it better.
This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?
5/10...weak personal.
Shit...I don't even have to go out on a limb to break this twig...
Since when do people quote themselves in their own fuckin' sig?
7/10...lol quite good.
I read your old battles, streched lines and your punches simple
Shit...everybody hates "ackne"... so I'll gladly pop this pimple
6/10...meh, alright play on his name.
Seriously, this herb is worthless... just like armless kids in rowing
Oh well shit, knowing this...AckRite probably won't be showing
3/10...nah, really ain't feeling this.
This kid's polite, can't throw punches, specially if he Acts Rite
Maybe he missed a key, cause we all know that he's Wack rite?
8/10...best bar out of your verse.
overall 75%..
ackrite...
Categoric Assessin, U Presently Suck....The Facts Are Displayed
And When Anyone Talks Of Ur Skill, Its Always..'Back In The Day'
5/10...kinda weak here.
Your A Lousy Faggot............Never Were A Metaphorical Blessing
What Do U Mean To Da Site? (Wait!..Thats A Rhetorical Question)
6/10...tryed to be witty, but it didn't work.
Ain No Stoppin Me, Ya Wack..& Frankly..I Juss Laugh At U Dawg
Cuz Kid..U'll Neva Be On 'Top'..Ya Can't Even Climb Vaginal Walls!
4/10... -_- are you serious?
I'm Morbid & Violent.....'Rainin On Ya Sorrow' Like Stormin Tyrants
& If U Think U Can ‘Stomach This’ Im 'PERFORMIN DA HEIMLICH'!
7/10...quite nice feeling the second line.
Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!
3/10...nah ain't feeling this either.
Sorrow Cant Beat Me, My Words'll Wipe Away & Knock This Herb
Kid..If Money Could Talk.......Then You'd Be At A Loss For Words!
7/10...blah, decent.
overall 45%.
you could of came harder. but overall the sorrow was just a bit stronger and consistant.
no hate..

.Poetic. 05-21-05 10:35 AM

Damn, bout time this got some votes..

Upping for some more yo..

AckRite 05-21-05 01:07 PM

Damn Son..........O.D...............Aight Uppin For Votes Niggas

.Poetic. 05-21-05 02:19 PM

Yeup..

Upping this battle..

.I.hate.this.50.characters.bullshit.

13th. 05-21-05 06:03 PM

This was feedback posted for AckRite
 
jus checkin polls 4 mi homeboy....................

B2Kbump.bumpbump 05-21-05 10:59 PM

This was feedback posted for The Sorrow
 
Checkin' the polls................................

morse code 05-21-05 11:46 PM

Voted For: The Sorrow

AckRite you front thug, but we all know that your faking son...
Just look at the emcee in your sig...wait a sec...there isn't one
8/10...lmao, nice personal,
This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?
8/10...nutha good personal
Shit...I don't even have to go out on a limb to break this twig...
Since when do people quote themselves in their own fuckin' sig?
9/10...LMAO, thats all i must say
I read your old battles, streched lines and your punches simple
Shit...everybody hates "ackne"... so I'll gladly pop this pimple
7//10...eehh, okay i guess
Seriously, this herb is worthless... just like armless kids in rowing
Oh well shit, knowing this...AckRite probably won't be showing
8/10..LMAO, nice personal and punch
This kid's polite, can't throw punches, specially if he Acts Rite
Maybe he missed a key, cause we all know that he's Wack rite?
9/10...LMFAO!!!!!!!
49/60
^good verse, nice ass personals and punches...one of the best verses ive seen in awhile...bad ass(in a good way) closer too

Categoric Assessin, U Presently Suck....The Facts Are Displayed
And When Anyone Talks Of Ur Skill, Its Always..'Back In The Day'
8/10...nice opener
Your A Lousy Faggot............Never Were A Metaphorical Blessing
What Do U Mean To Da Site? (Wait!..Thats A Rhetorical Question)
7/10...eehh, decent
Ain No Stoppin Me, Ya Wack..& Frankly..I Juss Laugh At U Dawg
Cuz Kid..U'll Neva Be On 'Top'..Ya Can't Even Climb Vaginal Walls!
7/10..LMAO but no personal
I'm Morbid & Violent.....'Rainin On Ya Sorrow' Like Stormin Tyrants
& If U Think U Can ‘Stomach This’ Im 'PERFORMIN DA HEIMLICH'!
8/10..nice
Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!
8/10..good personal
Sorrow Cant Beat Me, My Words'll Wipe Away & Knock This Herb
Kid..If Money Could Talk.......Then You'd Be At A Loss For Words!
8/10...nice closer although not as dope as sorrows

^also a nice verse...good punches and werdplay, but had hard competition...

overall-
opener:TS
closer:TS
structure:AR
flow:tie
punches/werdplay:tie
personals:TS

v/the sorrow


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