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Voted For: Ax Dogg

V/Ax Dogg......this was an ight battle nothin special but ax came harder wit the punchs but ur structure is fucked work on that....Adrenaline.....those quote shit is played no no no dont do that an ur punchs were played also structure was fucked....work on those things ight....No Hate........RETURN THE FAVOR (Or u never get another honest Vote from me)
Opener=A
Closer=A
Punchs=A
Structure=Tie(both were wack)
Wordplay=A
Personals=A
Vocab=A
multi's=Tie(none Really)
Overall=AX Dogg....

Voted For: Ax Dogg

I'm full of Adrenaline, ready to murk you, hurt you, and lough out loud when I see your verse
In the moment you decided to battle Ax Dogg, your adrenaline went down like a deadly curse
that's what I notice when weak niggaz choose to battle against this boy, I'm ready to destroy
I like playin with you, watch you grow full of joy, you so weak u like my dissin toy
I'm Still waitin for you to answer my punchline, I really murked you with a simple line
But that fagness makes me shine, at the same time I will shine when I finish this line
U can't win against me with rap that's why u need that lightsaber on your signature
And if you gon change, dont change to Vader or to your Gay picnic picture
you don't know how to play this game, don't state my name again, you all diss the same
and tell me to get creative, Adrenaline is a shame, I will personally ask management to clear your name

Yo Da Structure Iz Fucked Up Dawg, But Yo Lyrikal Content Wuz Off Da LEASH!!!Sum Linez Wuz Streched Da Fuck Out Lyke Rubberbandz, But Yo Personalz And Punchlinez Saw U Thru It, Consistantly Droppin, Da Flow Wuz Hot Like Fahrenheit, Not Much I Can Fault, U Brought It Live, Son!

my spits is razor leavin u like shriveled paper,u aint a hustla so I wont even ax dogg
leave u cold feet like u stepped in my frosty spit,my flow is ludacris so get back dawg
it's funny how this dude thought he could clown me but he got owned by a ghost (casper)
it shows he's a more on,cuz he's high on makin stretched lines like smokin long and chokes
look ur punches is more wack than batman hits,I'll leave this kid lighted up like matches
fact is,u couldn't get one good feed on your rhymes if u was a bird when da egg hatches
my punches is killin dis kid like cashus clay,yo he just had to make his raps delayed
that's why dis herb gave 4 days to spit, and he said

only chance of you winnin is u were playin monopoly,stop talkin trash and speak properly
like his mom did,im just trainin dis kid to spit cuz he just a fuckin dog..........NOW SIT!!

Dat Closer Wuz Real Weak Dawg, Da Verse Jus Wuznt Creative, Seemed 2 Have A Few Fillerz An Da Vocab An Da Wording Of Yo Linez Wuz Pretty Much Effectless, No Hate Doh, I Wuz Feelin Dat Line Where U Had Da Quote Ov Hiz, But Da Rest Ov Da Verse Wuznt All Dat, Dawg! Keep Trying Doh, I'll Look Out Fo Ya Battlez In Da Future!!

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature

Voted For: Ax Dogg

Ax:
flow - strong
structure - fucked up
punchline - strong
personals - hard hittin
multi's - well played

Adrenaline:
flow - good
structure - fucked up too
punchlines - weak
personals - mmmmmm....
multi's - I saw sum... good played

V/ Ax
RTF

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Voted For: Adrenaline

adrenaline gets this cuz he came harder and made it more personal.

both verses had good punches in them though.

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ax dogg u suck...lol .

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Voted For: Ax Dogg

Nice...I liked both verses but Ax's was a little better.
I liked the "shriveled paper" part in Adrenaline's verse but Ax is right, whats up with the lightsaber...well anyway both verses were great but Ax's was better.

But well... Flow was lost in both verses, as well as the structure, but ax's had better personals and punchlines.... multi's, hmmm hmmm.... NO

my vote goes for ax... keep up dude

Voted For: Ax Dogg

Ax just came through and murdered him..... had better punches personals and structure..... ur only problems was metas

to adrenaline im just gonna say work on everything.. elevate and watch 106 and park freestyle fridays... see how they battle get a style and stick with it

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