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...the super...........c.s.

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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

both pieces were madd good both showed alot of potential alot of creativity and the structure,vocabulary, mostly everythin else was a tie between both of u i couldnt decide who was better except on the whole content of the piece supervillian brung way more content and visual words to his piece and was way longer so he really took his time to work on this piece so my v// goes to supervillian but both competitors were good

^^^thanks for the vote/feedback. good lookin' out brutha.

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...the super...c.s....

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...the supervillain of crhyme...

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...the supe duper wun...

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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Aii This is What I think

Acuity- Nice start off man You Reall know how to supply a good hook In Topicals and it hade me reading it until You started using To Many Words into one line which made it harder to follow I MEan It was nice drop but Yet I had to read through it Like 2 times Jus to get What you was really getting at in this battle Im Not hating and you know me better than that im jus hitting up slept on topicals and I feel that You Couldve done better In This Battle man considering your Level of skills Feel Me?

Super
Aii man Your storyline is the first thing that caught my attention It was nice I Mean It started of with a conflict ended with a Positive Conclusion and thats what made it pleasant to read And thats what made it easier to read lol excepting one thing .....YOUR STRUCTURE < >LOL I know a whole lotta people say Fuck Strcuture but with me I cant stand to see a good drop surrounded by a sloppy strcuture man I Cant Stand it LOL It makes it look all newbish so thats The only thin i Think You need to work on and Its not a really big Problem and u & I Know it So ......Yeah You Get my vote in this battle

GOOD BATTLE NICE DROP FROM BOTH OF YOU !!

RTF In any battle link in my sig PLEASe

thanks for your time stanz. good lookin'...........im glad you enjoyed our work.

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s.v. the tyrant, c.s.

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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

wow...........this was a nice battle i love reading topicals but super you took this just yours seemed to be thought out more n better vocab acuity yours was good and everything but i think super got this i liked the end of supers verse the most it woz really nice damn...great battle

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