Voted For: L.I.

L.I. is a pretty cool guy..

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i was feelin LIz verse more and he had better punchz
therefor he getz my vote...weak battle

Uppin for more votes..................................

Voted For: L.I.

uppin this............................................

Voted For: L.I.

this was a blowout

L.I - even though ya punches aint really hit hard u still won..ya closer was ok but it was kinda wack..2nd bar was defintely not good..after that u did pretty well..i really liked that hairline bar.....7/10




Wickedclown - wow..u suck..ya whole verse had no punches..no personals..no wordplay..no nothing..u defiitely lost this won easily.....2/10




L.I wins!!!!!

Voted For: Wickedclown

Wickedclown - Good spit, it flowed well, punches were on target and you had some good personals also.

Best Line - faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef

Worst Line - leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds

L.I. - Alright spit, had some good flow, and the punches were pretty decent.

Best Line - I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing

Worst Line - Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy

OVERALL - Wicked took this battle, he had better personals and his punches were solid. L.I. came pretty weak, his flow was on but he didnt have much wordplay, and punches wernt as hard as wickeds.

Vote - Wickedclown

haha yer still here kid? i remember u rode me way back. damn those were the days

I guess I should up this .........

Voted For: L.I.

aiight lets see:
Wicked:
everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
wth? no......... 3/10
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
ehh......... 4/10
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
Not hard hittin'. no punch really 3/10
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
ok..... 4/10
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
no hard punch..... 2/10

damn, this wasn't that great. You had good flow. But try and make your punches hit harder by adding some wit and some wordplay maybe. till then keep elevating. 16/50 (32%)

L.I.:
I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
haha nice, not that hard tho.... 5/10
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
ehh.. it's cooo.. 3/10
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
lmao.... nice....... 8/10
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
lmao.. wow.... nice 8/10
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
haha nice..... 6/10

Aiight you started bad, but picked it up nicely in the end. good shit. Nice punches. 30/50 (60%)


overall easy to see who won. But props to both for spittin' and yea,

v/L.I.

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196402

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 

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Voted For: Wickedclown

I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
^^^played out and uncreative....2/10
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
^^^got a LINK to show he proof of him gettin beat by his bitch......or is it a fake personal........1/10
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
^^weak.....and not hardhittin.......3/10
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
^^^ight...6/10
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
^^stretched out..2/10

You were too uncreative.U need to be original and bring new concepts to the table.Ur best line was the dizzy structure line because it was original.It was kinda weak like the rest.U flowed ight throughout the verse until u strched out the last bar.
4/10


everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
^^OK....6/10
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
^^^OK....6/10
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
^^I dun like this so much....4/10
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
^^too basic..........2/10
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
^^^mediocre...........5/10

U were still pretty weak.U had a lil more creativity than LI.U didn't have any stretched lines....so yuo also had better flow.Wat you missed is personals.But I'll give ya the vote because you had about 2-3 decent punches while L.I. had one.

Vote-Wicked Clown(Please vote in link below or I'll have to remove this vote)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552

wow, why is this battle even close???? no hatin Wicked....... but for real u lost badly

Voted For: L.I.

Close.. :-/
Both had weak openers.. Iunno it was hit and miss, you obviously both half assed this battle -_-..

LI won I feel, but only by the skin of his teeth..