Voted For: OneStepBeyond

One step--- haha ur shit was funny, specially that last line, good punches, flow was good, structure was too

Marv--- your verse was decent, but one step just came harder with punches, flowed good, personals were ok, and structure was ight

Punches-- One Step
Flow-- Tie
Personals-- One Step
Structure-- Tie
Wordplay-- Marv
Multis-- Neither

FInal VOte--- One step....

Rtf-
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...64&page=2&pp=15

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream,
The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,*
—3 nope.. wack punch
You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe,
What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS,
—5 decent punch
Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv,
Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...**
—4 good persona, but weak punch

overall – 12/30

onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth.
dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self.
—6.. good persona, punch was decent
ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak.
you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'.
—3.. played here, been used..
i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey.
O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay.
—5.. decent

overall – 14/30

winner – even though this battle was pretty weak here, MaRVJay
took this one.. his punches just were way harder.. the flow his was
nice & he had some good personas up in there.. but no hate here

..1

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

OSB:

Your punches were not the best, but by far, not the worst. They hit decently and you had some nice personals in there.
Structure was kinda gay, but that doesnt really matter to me...I am basing this vote on your punches and personals

Marvjay1009

You fell off ALOT in this verse. I feel that you underestimated your opponent, and it caught up to you. Punches were weak, and mama jokes are played, I dont give a fuck what you say, they are!! Personals were ok, but not the best.

Therefore, I am giving this vote to OSB for being consistent with punches and personals that overall hit harder than yours anyways

v/ OSB

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

aiiightttttttttt....
MARV -
onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth.
dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self.
^^^^ nice personal...
ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak.
you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'.
^^^ nice punch, had me laughin..
i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey.
O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay.
^^ nice closer ...
8/10

OSB -
Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream,
The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,*
^^ pretty weak opener.. stretched...
You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe,
What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS,
^^ Aiight nothin special...
Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv,
Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...**
^^ weak as fuck...
5.5/10

vote MARV

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth.
dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self.
o.k, Im not even gonna follow, the link, I see what you sayin, and I'll assume he owned himself, decent personal.
ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak.
you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'.
This was played out, setup was fillerish, you could have packed it with something that would have increased the punches effectiveness, average bar.
i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey.
O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay.
first line... check your grammar, cuz im just think not fam, is missing some words, Im not gonna play fill in the blanks, punch was pretty good, nothing spectacular but effective.

6.5/10

Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream,
The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,*
lol, this was a clever punch, I liked the wordplay- flowed well, im not sure bout the setup line though.
You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe,
What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS,
lol this was pretty good, setup is o.k, the punch was decent- so far rhyme scheme as well.
Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv,
Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...**
ROFLMAO- lol, that did it. great closer.

8/10

I just think that OneStepBeyond was more consistent, he had a great closer, where I liked Marv's closer but it was the only bar I really liked in his verse, and OneStepBeyond was more consistent. Vote OneStepBeyond.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Ain't even try...

^^^^^^^ reason u lost this battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Nice battle here...

Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream,
The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,*

ORIGINAL CONCEPT, NICE OPENER

You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe,
What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS,

PRETTY NICE PUNCH

Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv,
Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...**

I KNOW YOU USED A PLAYED CONCEPT ON PURPOUSE...BUT SEEMS TO BACKFIRE AS IT WAS A WASTED BAR REALLY.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Nice battle here...

Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream,
The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,*

ORIGINAL CONCEPT, NICE OPENER

You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe,
What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS,

PRETTY NICE PUNCH

Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv,
Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...**

I KNOW YOU USED A PLAYED CONCEPT ON PURPOUSE...BUT SEEMS TO BACKFIRE AS IT WAS A WASTED BAR REALLY.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth.
dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self.

NICE OPENER N PERSONAL.

ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak.
you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'.

NICE NAMEPLAY AND PUNCH HERE...

i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey.
O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay.

DONT GET THE 1ST LINE BUT AGAIN GOOD PUNCH
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

MARV GETS THIS DUE TO THE FACT HIS PUNCHES N' PERSONALS WERE MORE CONSISTANT AND HIT HARDER.

OSB YOUR WAS GOOD BUT WASNT FEELIN THE CONCEPT FOR YOUR LAST BAR..

NO HATE.

RTF IN SIG.