This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

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Uppin this fuckin shit

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^^^^ What he said...

uppin this shit.. seriously

Voted For: Skriptz

Aii This Is what I Think

Black
Your lyrics are trash filled, talk shit? Get ya ass killed
Watch me "rip 'skriptz' into pieces" like a "bad film" *
Aii ...It was Somewhat good
Your raps is sour, and your style is used and played
Plus you get more "boo's" on stage, than at "happy hour" **
..:nono: DEf Did not ryme[/n]
The hottest rapper? Please, you're shit is far from AVERAGE!
So watch me "take ya top off" like an "exotic dancer"
[b]again Poor ryming ....The punch was aii
You hate Im on top, thats why you tried escaping this drop ***
Shit, you couldn't "deliver hot" if it "came in a box" ****
....:::: Played ::::....
You're the type who "writes early" and the only way this kid might merk me
..............Is because all of RV is "on his dick" like "herpes" *****
The Best Bar Outta yA Whole Verse ...and yet wasnt all dat

Skriptz


MC Hammer must be his idol.. & ur punches are sounded dim
They say he was born w/ illness.. too bad it wore off of him
LOL Not a Good pucnh but made me laugh
Ur not really into females.. so no wonder that they stay far
..from you.. & ur last shot @ greatness.. was in a gay bar
Not Nuttin Specail couldve been better
So while ur up in there.. all you serving is gay men
Cuz.. the closet route for u.. to getting skills.. is under construction
Poor ryming ....But The wording was aii
Leaving you scared & lost.. and I’m hittin u with these bars
Only way u’ll get votes..
..Is cuz ur wackness .. got Rv members laughin so hard
Damn Thats Sort of Crazy LOL
Well.. he told us that he was offically gay .. so lets all make fun
..of him.. he knew accidents happen.. but u was made as one
:shocked: ...Never knew you were gay

Overall
Aii I Think That Skriptz takes this battle Def not bcuz of pucnhez bcuz both of you were fucked up when it came around to the punchez area BUT .....in the personals area Skriptz Ripped Black and thats what Gives him my vote
Nuttin Personal NO HATE Wish you both luck in the future

[b]RTF in any Battle Link in My Sig

LOL at u not following my rhyme scheme, but w/e...Lets get some more votes in this bitch

Uppin this shit...Lets get some fucking votes!!!!!!!!

uppin this shit

Uppin thru the fucking roof...

Voted For: Skriptz


Sik Wit It
Good Verse Man Alot Of Nice Punches Here, Hot lones, Personals Was Good Meta's Was Here And Was Good Vocabulary Good, Structure Nice, Wordplay In Here Was Very Good You Came Creative On This Battle, With Every Category Mentioned Above Nicely Done

Black M
Aiight Good Wordplay Man Punches Wasn't Quite There Though But Okay Personals Hmm Was Okay Not Hitting Hard pLayed Out Concepts On This Verse, Mostly Used Wordplay Meta's Was Iffy Not Hitting On Target Much Cool Battle

Skriptz Got This Hands Down Man

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^^ Wow at the dickride vote...

Uppin thru the fucking roof...

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Upping this fucking shit...