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Stanza 05-26-05 10:54 AM

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.Poetic. 05-26-05 06:09 PM

VOTE YOU FUCKIN' SLUTS.....<--- I can type like C.A.L.I....

Germ 05-26-05 07:05 PM

^ yeah, but you also gotta go ask for votes now on aim ;)

hahahahaa, fuckin queer eh

uppin for stanza :shoot:

Sik Wit It 05-26-05 07:28 PM

Voted For: The Sorrow

You made a thread asking for an award, but for a noob that's no surprise
You'll get as much votes as that "OM of the Month" has gotten in replies
—pretty decent opener
Remember King~~Dipset?...Wait didn't that alias get banned for cheating?
Shit, without voting rings Stanza's as hopeless as blind children reading!
—decent punch, felt that this one didn’t come as hard as ur opener
You claim that your dope, but check your stats...you're not a fuckin veteran
Wins? battling noobs and getting them DQ'd is the only way you getting them
—good persona, punch was good too
Like "breakfast foods" I'm eating you early, you're about to have regrets
Because your words only have "good taste" when you're eating "alphabets"
—blah, weak punch
Look, For every three wins you have, it seems that you receive a loss too
You just won your 9th battle...do the math...even it shows that I own you
—booo, not feeling this punch Sorrow


It Took You A Long Time to drop so Face The Reality Timer
When I finish With You Im Goin to Jail for Bruatility to a Minor
—ooo, decent
Your Done for Now Yo Crew is Lookin for A Leader To Hire
When U dropped U get stomped On & spat at like small fires
—pretty decent, should’ve came harder in this punch
You No Show Yo Flow's Mystery Bcuz No ones Seen it Bro
Not a win on Yo Record yet?...No Wonder U "The Sorrow"
—haha, punch was aight here
I Give & Take back What You Borrow So Gimme My Skills
U wont Step To this Battle Cuz I Left U In a Chair on Wheels
—could’ve switched ur rhyming on this punch around here
Watch me send Stroke 2~Yo Grandma as presentz Like Santa
You Thought Your rymes was Like "Eazy E"
....................BuT Yo ass Is comin "Straight Outta Canada"
—weak closer

overall – both emcee’s did pretty decent in this battle here..

Stanza – ur punches here were pretty basic in this battle..
Could’ve made some switch-a rounds in a couple of ur bars
Ur flow was good, stayed on point there, ur structure was
Decent, (don’t center it up tho), but u cam a little weak
In the punches, could’ve added some more personas in here
& harder punches, & u could’ve tookin this battle..

The Sorrow – not ur best drop here, but some of ur punches
Were pretty forced out, & some were okay though, ur flow
Was on point on this one, and the structure was good..
Basically u had a decent vocab & good use of personas
On Stanza in this battle.. but overall u had an aight drop
Though

No hate to both.. just voting

RTF.. The Sorrow.. Or This Vote Will Get Removed

Stanza 05-26-05 07:43 PM

Wow an Uppin for me ?

Thanx Drakel You are a True ...slut LOL j.k

And Jus for the record im not RTF I dont give a damn if you get it removed its not for me anyway LOL

.Poetic. 05-26-05 11:52 PM

Uuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn

Adam 05-27-05 10:45 AM

bitchslutfuckcuntfuckshitbitchpissslutcuntfuckshit cuntfuckslut

Adam 05-27-05 06:07 PM

^ After that sweet upping nobody voted...

Somebody close this..

.Poetic. 05-28-05 01:34 AM

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.Poetic. 05-28-05 11:54 AM

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MyNamesGrafhYall 05-28-05 12:00 PM

Stanza Iz Not Krew Now, Vote/Da Sorrow, Much Better Verse Da Personalz Wuz Flawless, They Hit Hard Az Hell In Diz Battle, Punchez Wuz Good 2, Stanza Had Sum Iight Wordplay, But Lacked Hard Hitting Personalz, So Mah Vote Goez 2 Da Sorrow

Return Da Vote Plz

.Poetic. 05-28-05 04:50 PM

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.Poetic. 05-28-05 08:35 PM

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.Poetic. 05-29-05 12:35 AM

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