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UNF 06-15-05 01:37 PM

This was feedback posted for Oz™
 
Checking For Sab's Vote Man.......................

Oz™ 06-19-05 07:05 PM

uppin yall...................

Daubs 06-19-05 07:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daubs
RTF ASAP OR THIS GETS DQ'ED :thumbup:


last day today...........................................

Oz™ 06-20-05 03:07 PM

uppin the ko............

Daubs 06-20-05 03:44 PM

last chance, no bullshit or this gets dqed, and you get put in mah dog for not rtf!

Daubs 06-21-05 05:39 PM

30 mins.............................................. ......

Oz™ 06-21-05 05:57 PM

What A Bitch.......................................

Daubs 06-21-05 06:09 PM

man, your the one who doesnt vote...

You should learn.

My votes getting Dq'ed now.

Dirty Nigga 06-22-05 09:51 AM

Voted For: Oz™

the Oz is capable of destruction jimmy p..ya dig
cuz i'll blow ya brains out......just like your new sig!!
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DECENT HIT

Jimmy P's determined to lose,leave him buried as deep as the name of his crew
im throwin *chinese books* at Jimmy Pokets because Oz was made to *serve this foo/fool*
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GOOD CONCEPT, BUT COULD OF BEEN WORDED BETTER

you can check his tournament results, the kid didnt come handy
i just stared and *snickered*,cuz da troop ran outta bars & i aint talkin bout candy
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NICE, SECOND LINE WAS STRETCHED, BUT FUCK ALL THAT, IT WAS A DOPE LINE

jimmy pocketz cant kill me...i'll just destroy him in many sections
he's a tru troop? the only *nine's* he had was in his jordan collection
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NO..............WEAK AN JORDAN RHYMES IS PLAYED

i'll remove you from this battle son...and leave jimmy pockets to rest
cuz you always talkin bout bein the baddest...when ur one level below the best*
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DECENT PERSONAL

Decent verse OZ, Nice punches, nice personals....alot more creative than Jimmys verse, concepts of your bars were more original, a few lines could of been worded better, but this is an easy win for ya'.......






This Kid callin Me Out? ..Only Time u Associate with Stars
Probly Cuz Viewing "Oz" only Time u Associate with Bars
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HORRIBLY WORDED, AN CALLIN YOURSELF A STAR IN A BATTLE ONLINE IS NOT GOOD.............DONT GET TOO CONCEITED HOMIE

Notice how I Checked.. and Dropped First .. Mr..Murcinal
2 Be Real you Couldnt Drop Deep Cutz.. if u was Surgical
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FIRST LINE WAS GAY, BUT YOU SAVED IT...NICE METTA IN THE SECOND LINE

Ya Neva Get Respect.So Keep Fakein..And Keep Waitins
Why Does ya Rec Neva Come out....Like Obese Patients
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AGAIN, THE SET UP WAS WEAK, SECOND LINE WAS STRAIGHT, OK HIT HERE

Tell you Wha Speed Up ya Battles cuz u on Slow Focus
Oz Punches are Juvenile they comin @ me "Slow Motion"
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WEAKEST BAR IN THE BATTLE, SHIT DIDNT EVEN RHYME DOG

Please Pm Strobe...Im Blinding you Like Night Reflections
U Lost? Cuz ya Avy aint even Movein in the Right Directions
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NOT FEELIN IT


Not the best verse from you my nigga....weak punches, nothin too complex, wordplay was basic on the whole...personals didnt really hit hard what so ever man.....dunno if its 'cause OZ had a better verse or you came weak...but ya verse was in no way what so ever in comparion with OZ, He easily got this

No hate dog

Return the vote in my battle with marvjay or vote will be removed....links in the sig :thumbup:

Peace out, good job y'all.


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