This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

lmao.............................................. .................... yo after we audio we should text for the fun of it.

Voted For: FuxJustAWord

shit fux...this was close, im actually leaning towards
phenom a bit thou, just cuz his verse seemed harder hitting
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but ill break it down,
I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers
^^^this was nice, i acually laughed
I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now
^^decent, short lines phenom,..lol,
Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo
^^lol, omg, its not good, but funny as hell
C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix
^^decent....
I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed
^^punch was decent
Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word
^^didnt connect
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im impressed phenom, you did alright for ya first battle
a couple concepts were iffy..like that cali line...rofl..
but overall i liked your opener n the rest was ok..
good personal too.......
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dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
^^ok, i wasnt overly feelin this
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
^^decent.....
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
^^no, wheres the punch homie
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
^^huh..?
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta
^^nice.........
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k after readin both again, imma go with fux, his closer was
better then phenoms opener which were the best 2 bars in the battle...but its close, i mean honestly fux, i think you
underestimated phen alot here,.. it could go either way

lol, it wasnt as much underestimatin as it was bein REal short on time...... but i know wat ur talkin about... uppin

Voted For: FuxJustAWord

ima give this one to fux because his personals were more irrelevant and hard hitting. i didnt like tha structure too much, but i cant complain because ya flow was on point. i liked that creativitie and some pnuches, but alot of punches did hit too hard. ya verse was nice. nice metas and punches, i think ya personals took it tho.

phenom-ya verse was ight, but not all that. alot of up and down bars. one bar was nice, tha other 2 was wack. i didnt see too much consistency in ya verse. you did have some good multies at tha beginning, but i think it hurt u when u switched up ya style. you started off nice, but fell badly, sso i cant give u this vote. plus ya structure was up and down too.

fux gets my vote


rtf on battle link in sig or i will remove this vote from this battle,

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

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Voted For: FuxJustAWord

I think that FuxJustAWord got this battle because i feel that FuxJustAWord came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt FuxJustAWord got it they were used effectifely and were on point Phenom-in-all u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion, ya could tell it's been a while since you last did text...it's basic punches and a lil self-g personals i felt went to FuxJustAWord good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to FuxJustAWord and flow and structure i'll give to FuxJustAWord.

V/FuxJustAWord There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup:

yea, ill returnn it wen i get home..................... uppin

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Voted For: FuxJustAWord

Explanation

Fux
dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
That was An Aii Wordplay
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
...LOL Didnt know if that was For your or against your oppenent LOL ...nice wording
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
//....Aii Personal Bcuz its true
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
:shocked: ....Thats was jus......:thumbup:
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta
LOL That was aii But This Is What I Think

Best Bar:
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
That Bar Right There I Think That Gave you the Win Really BUt All The rest of your bars were ordinary nuttin unusaul so You did good

Phenom-in-all
I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers
..Thats was Good
I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now
:nono: That wording was off
Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo
That bar Was soso
C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix
Ryming Was off By Like amile
I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed
.......That was aii
Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word
.....Nice name play But the punch was off

I Think That You Know that You Lost This battle you jus Wanted to see where your test skill were at Personally I Think You did Reall Good for somebodies first time but Fux got you with that one specail bar LOL and thats why you really lost bcuz you didnt really have a bar that stuck out like that

RTF in any battle link in my sig