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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck, im not gonna lie. i was planning on voting against khaoz becausse he gets on my damn nerves, but one man band lol...he beat you.

Better personals, better punchlines....one m.b you used alot of self glory an my guess is...................you thought you could of used anny rhymes an you had him beat, i never would of imagined this ho beating one man band, but his verse was just more of a battle verse with better punchlines an this site claims personals are 60% of what you need in your verse an you had....none, one man band. thats a shame, and i hate to do this, i really do....but vote/khaoz theory, for fuck sake lol

This was feedback posted for One M.B.
 

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Voted For: One M.B.


Dawg, Why U Wantin ''Dread Extensions''..U Already Got A ''Big Head''*
Ur ''From: Heaven''...So Now U Have Da Rite 2 Disrespct Da Dead?!**
^^eh, statin facts.punch was weak
I Saw Wat U Said, U Honestly Believe Peepz Gon Pay 4 Ur Rhymez?
Throwin 2 5 Cents In A Wishin Well Iz Da Only Tyme U ''Drop Dimez''
^^eh, played concept n no punch really
Addicted 2 RV Money, Askin 4 Billions, But Ur Da ''Realest Around''? [huh]
Wat ''Cat''...Act ''Intellectual''? But Really..u Dont Kno HOW STUPID U SOUND!***
^^lmfao, thats your opinion bro...not a diss
I Saw Yo Tutorialz, Dawg Itz Plain 2 C, G-Dat U Have No Skill
Been Here 4 Years, Elevation Izza Long Process...But We Waitin On U STILL
^^decent....but basic
Keep Walkin, Ya' Lines Aint Str8 Lyke A Drunk Trynna Stumble & Stagger
U Never Even Touched ''Purple Haze''
& If U Met Ya Idol, He'd Only Wanna Stab U Wit ''Dolly Dagger''****
^^decent...sig play
Feel Da Jagger Ov Her Blade, Peirce Ya Skin, U Aint Floatin Round My Way
Lyke A Shark Wit No Fin, In This Part On Da Deep Blue Sea U Gets No PLAY!
^^not feelin it..srry
Ur Sinkin, Rhymez Iz Stinkin, Frum Da Smell, Only Tyme ''Ur Shit'' Iz Out Ya Mouth
Cut Thiz ''Birds Wings'', But Itz Iight He Already ''Nests Down South''[australia]
^^wheres the punch man..?
Take-a-seat-bee, U Aint ''Sprayin'' Nuthin..Even Get Mad @ Graffitti!*****
Wit'da Rite Buttons I'm Pushion, I'll Hand U A Cushion, & U Still ''Shy On'' Beatin-Me
^^ok,...
One ''M.B''..I'll Stick a Knife 2 Ya Shoulder, Soldier Then U Can Be a ''KNIGHT''
Pearly Gatez? Naw, Da Closet Room Bulb Iz Hiz Idea Ov ''Cummin 2 Da Light''
^^terrible wording, ok concept.
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your biggest problem is your content
you drop bars that dont connect on any level
basically just putting statements about him dont
constitute as a punch.....n stop cappin all the 1st letters
of ya words, its really not good to read, especially cuz you stretch ya lines homie...pz.no hate

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whoa, which faggot i'm dissin? i forget, man you have ta forgive it,
you the so called gangsta stabbin on victims, wait, aint you avidly christian?
^^ok, forgive it..? wasnt feelin the falloff in flow but w/e
You call me a tyrant 'n shit, but I’m the illest with rhymin 'n spits
I don't need the votes when even my opponent is ridin my dick -_-
^^thats like your concept..ok, but stop using it..lol
No denyin it kid, ya spit wackness, is that all's ya do?
I mean damn ya weak…I seen games’a badminton with more balls than you,
^^decent
Took up a callout now this cunts mine, and man, its crunchtime
Fuck Where’s Wally, this guys verses is like wheres the punchline?
^^thats nice...fresh...
this dude is a bore, a fake ass wanna be gruesome 'n raw,
Beat me with flow, wits and skill? Shit…hes never used 'em before!
^^nice, multi tourny exact structure...good shit omb
^^im dice'n a whore,so he cant talk shit, let alone write anymore........i still remember it...lol
my standard with rhymes has got ya bladder in strife,
guess i'm kinda like married women, 'cos i only get phatter with time
^^self glory....not feelin it
i'ma rapper divine, so sick when i spit i'm needin to puke,
knew i had dickriders, but I didn't think you was leadin the group
^^decent, but thats another one of those concepts that are old
leavin ya mute, flows got more holes than whats been seen in a flute,
can think ya dope kid, but there's a difference between dreamin 'n truth..
^^nice
Makin ya bleed from ya tooth, down like dawn, get on my dick 'n ya bound to fall
Shafted…………………… you'd be a better mc if ya made no sound at all..
^^nice
I ain’t even take this serious, I got worser broads ta break
Cos in case ya didn’t notice……….. my only personal was fake -_-
^^no idea.........but closer was still decent..lol
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omb-good content for the most part fell off in a couple areas
stayed consistent with punches n ya vocab ect..was koo..
i was feelin ya verse more.......