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This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
LOL Siiiiiick, what's poppin homeboy?!
you got a way with words.....real dope....you got this man! |
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This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
checkin polls for no reason
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Soul Ya Not Da Smartest Man, MEAT GRIP..Came Online Wit Sausage Hands Only Beatin Me If You Got Fans...That Ride Dick Harder Than Lil Kims Glands ^^^OK You Hoe Not Necessarily A Garden Tool, Ring This Retard...Alarm His Drool Who Knows This Fool? Ya Beg 4 Respect More Than Deadbeat Fathers Do! ^^OK Scared Of You? Not Seed, Son You Make No Sense....Like Permin Weaves! I'm SICK Nigga..I Heard You Sneeze, I'm Back So Exit..Tell Ya Spine 2 Leave ^^weak TBN Would Easily Merk Dis Coward, Introduction 2 Dirt..You Meetin Flowers Cuz You Died Before DROPPIN Ya Verse......So Fall Twice Like Da Towers! ^^^weak You Probably Wack Like Tha Rest I've Conquered....Nigga Accept Ya Loss Thinkin You Boss? That Title Is Mine, URINATION-ON...Now U Pissin Me Off ^^wak 12 Is Enough To Dislocate Ya Bone...Rappings A Talent...& Ur Not Known! Abandoned Since Birth, He's So Twisted...Even Psychos Leave Him Alone ^^OK Couple of weak lines in this.Flow was a bit bland.Try to shorten ur lines up.Best line was the deadbeat fathers one.Worst was that urination one.Add some more personals now. Yo I'll i slit yo throat like a gash from a 'chete, Eatin you for breakfast like a fatman wid spaghetti, ^^spagetti for breakfast?..nah,u just said it cause it rhymed If a punch equated to a bullet fom a nine, You'd appreciate dat you would die every time, ^^suked Nigga you a bitch in disguise, jus admit dat shit, Now I've seen a couple of yo rhymes,why d'ya spit dat shit? ^^basic Yo da gap between our levels' always gettin bigger, You v. me is like Vanilla Ice against Jigga, ^^basic Yo I pity you fool, like Baracus from da A-Team, Only time yo ass iz beatin me iz in ya daydream, ^^basic I be murkin fake ones on a regular basis, Look nigga me n you both know where your place iz, Lyrically i'll leave you battered, left bloody n blue n black Hit you nonstop like Blackjack wid a deck of jacks, I dare your ass to try n lyrically attack man, I'll leave yo ass needin more pills than PacMan.... I ain't breakin it down no more.Ur shit was more pre-school than 50 cent and G-Unit.It was the epotome of simpilicity.Add more similies,metas,werdplay....shit like dat.Dun just say"u a bitch in disguise,just admit it".That shit 's whack. Vote-Sickseed(drop a vote in my battle please) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901 |
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yo sickseed.........drop a vote in my battle...click on the link I put at bottom of my vote.
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This was feedback posted for Souljah
Voted for: Souljah
checkin the pollz............................................. I'll leave this vote jus cuz I like Ax Dogg aight |
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This was feedback posted for Souljah
souljah is a lyrical shithead. you suck. i give huge props ta seed
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Voted For: §ick§eed
Vote has 2 go 2... SICk.... Soul Ya Not Da Smartest Man, MEAT GRIP..Came Online Wit Sausage Hands Only Beatin Me If You Got Fans...That Ride Dick Harder Than Lil Kims Glands You Hoe Not Necessarily A Garden Tool, Ring This Retard...Alarm His Drool ^^^^^^ lol good opener,, good start here Thinkin You Boss? That Title Is Mine, URINATION-ON...Now U Pissin Me Off 12 Is Enough To Dislocate Ya Bone...Rappings A Talent...& Ur Not Known! Abandoned Since Birth, He's So Twisted...Even Psychos Leave Him Alone ^^^^^^ lol good werd play here,,, hahah dat owned him thre... vote has 2 go 2 Sick ..here cuz of harder punches had...better flow....(by milez) overall structure was better and had better vocab... Suljah.... elevate nuff said.. Sick return the favour in my battle below ...aiight ... |
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