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Voted For: sabre

Aii Total Breakdwon Of explanation LOL

Barz Of steel
I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
.......First Line was aii but The 2nd was :nono:
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"
......Didnt Get whY hot was >""< (Quoted) Line wasnt good still
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"
Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"
Nice wodplay Mayne :thumbup:
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?
When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars" **
....Nice again .....
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground
This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"
didnt Ryme ......But the wordplay Was aii
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow
And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat"
....^Played concept in that bar rii there mayne So Thats a :nono:

Sabre
Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying
just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying!
..aii Nameplay But not a good punch
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes
but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!
LOL that was str8 couldve been worded betta
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud
only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves
...Rymin Was sort of off but That Punch was aii
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music
the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it
LOL Damn That Was sort of cold Not a good punch but jus the fact of what you said was crazy
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see
think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key
Not All dat Jus aii Nameplay
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist
its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist
:shocked: now Ive heard people say that Your skills are wack or very low on the meter but They dont Exist ......thats hot LOL

So Basically I Think That Sabre Takes this battle buT really All Bcuz Bars of stell Your Strcuture was too sloppy and it threw your flow off and also That Last bar that Sabre had was Nice and I Think Thats what Takes the cake in This battle

No Hate

Peace
Jus RTF !!

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Voted For: sabre

Barz Of Steel...ya pussy, upset im taking this? dont be lying
just switch the capitals in his name, this bitch is already crying!
dont know why you try man, coming with whack flow and played rhymes
but you can leave a crowd in awe.......damn, what a waste of time!
you're not that amazing kid, but i will make your face fall, bud
only time you droppin' catchy hooks, is fishin with baseball gloves
shit, you're on a rapboard, but son, you'll never make any good music
the mic in your avy has boxing gloves? yeah, to make sure you never use it
you may be barz of steel, you're still weak, so when you gunna see
think you got this on lock, but to break you all anyone needs is a key
dont test me, i was going to take it easy, but i just can't resist
its not that you're untouchable.......your skill just doesn't exist

Good Solid Verse, Nice Flow & Structure, Disses Wuz On Point, Real Hard Hitting Stuff, Nothin I Can Fault In Da Verse Dawg, Nice Shit


I'm an ape to fools, my lyrics will straight rape this dude
He hate's I'm a "Tiger" so watch me knock out "sabre's tooth" *
This dude's crazy, you're not tight, you think you nice when you drop lines
But "calling and asking for help" is the only time you could get a "hot line"
This maggot just sucks, cuz like "drunk boxers" you "can't throw an accurate punch"
Face it, you couldn't be "hot, dawg" even if you were "wrapped in a bun"
Look faggot you're done, so why you wanna say you hard?
When visiting "Starlight's" is the only time you deal with "Flaming bars" **
I'll rip ya face apart, Forreal, watch me leave this kid in the ground
This kid is a "clown", so I'll "get rid of the joker" like I was "playing cards"
I'll leave this lame with scars, Quit rap, you've got pathetic flow
And face it, you couldn't "spit sick"....... with an "infected throat"

Alot Ov Played Concepts, Uncreative Linez, Diz Aint Yo Best Drop Barz, Seen Much Better Frum U, Usually Yo Shitz On Point & Da Disses R Strong, U Lacked Personalz & Da Wordplay Wuz Far 2 Basic

V=Sabre, Much More Complex Disses & Good Solid Punz

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