bumpin da battle 4 yall 2..........................

Voted For: Daubs

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yo return the vote...

Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*

Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**

Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
^^^all good wordplay but not a single hard punch... feelin the wordplay but u didn't direct the wordplay into punches really...

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e.c-
How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
^^^this is like your only wordplay in ya verse and your sayin he sets the bar... thats a compliment.
aslo... your first bar is not a punch... second is callin him unathletic which isn't a hard hittin concept... 3rd bar was a gay punch, never a good idea... and the last bar was a good concept but was way too basic, it didn't have wordplay or nothin, just too simple... u needed to come with more wordplay and better concepts

vote- daubs cuz he was more creative... but need to direct more punches... no hate someone return an honest vote please!!! link at top

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n

Voted For: E.C

hmmm decent battle let me break it down:

E.C:-

Daubs be rapping about glocks thats fine but you take it too far
the thing is, your meant to diss me not use bullet holes for bars,*
Blah didnt really like this, personal but no real punch

Polo mint lines, wow what a concept, really your just pathetic,
i'm giving you the run around, its the only time oldhams athetic,**
Quite nice punch, not hard but creative which was gud

You a dick? you'd be hard when you blow, like you was in a band,
m-eazy got needs, thats the only reason you his right hand man,***
first line wasn't feelin, second line was dope, best so far

How can you be above the bar, when you fall off when you set it,
u.k till death? i hate to tell you this but no one wants you to rep it,****
Quite nice nothin special but o.k finisher

Overall:- o.k verse had its ups and downs but was pretty consistant without bein really dope, right hand man line i liked alot though


Daubs:

Predator just battlin high records? ,well I call em cowards..
Your like a naked granny.......your all talk and no trousers!!*
concept was o.k but not hard hittin personal really

Only people who listen to him are this fools friends..
You say your knot undone...yet are still at loose ends..**
O.k this was pretty gud

Use the search feature, no blunder or bad facts you'll find..
Put a woodsman in a grater, no wonder he got an axe to grind!!***
Creative but wasn't really feelin this

Givin blowjobs the only time this bitch is hard and breezy..
Should swap the C to a Z, you know for me this shit is EZ..
Played, basic, bad closer

Overall:- not gud really again was alrite but i've seen much beta from you in the punchline league, seemed rushin, was creative but nothin hit hard

Verdict

E.C gets this for the right hand man line, thought it was the only quotable in the battle and that was the difference

pz

thnx for the vote man.. uppib for the last vote...

This was feedback posted for E.C
 

Real good verses from both. Cant decide who to vote for, So I am just wishing you both good luck and checking the polls

ight... uppin for the last vote..........................

uppin for hte last mother fucking vote....................

Voted For: E.C

Blah, ok battle.

Daubs: Aight, I can see you were trying to be creative, but your punches just didn't hit hard. I'm still trying to figure out how you made that granny punch. I liked your creativity though, nice to see different concepts. However, I think your punches just weren't that good, just creative. Only a few personals, which hurt you, no real wordplay, basically too simple of a verse. Work on making more effective punches and including more personals.

E.C: Personals helped you win this battle. Some of your first lines in your bars felt like fillers though, so you need to watch that. Make them relevant and not just there so things rhyme. Personals hit somewhat, but nothing that ground shaking. I laughed at the ... one cuz of his verse. Overall, I think you need to work on including more wordplay. I liked your personals, but I didn't like the few fillers I found.

v- E.C