Voted For: hotshh!

after carefully reviewing both sides of the argument... hotshh! comes out on top. im not gonna break it down bar for bar because that means nothing....
hot had waay better punches and his flow was better. his wordplay was better than Khaoz and the personals were good. his best line was the living legends/die with laughter line... good shit. decent drop from hot, i've seen better, but this was decent.

khaoz wasnt too bad but he wasnt constantly hitting. there was too much of a gap between good lines.ur second line was HELLA stretched and some of ur concepts were kinda weak. that abreast line was probably your downfall, it was pretty weak and u didnt have any good punches to back it up. this verse was kinda newbish... all the quotes to try and stress wordplay made ur battle weaker. i say elevate and try again later.

V/ Hotshh!
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192634

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

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ahhh shit get that vote removed it was suppose to be feedback........My bad........

Voted For: hotshh!

I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
^^^ only line i liked but dopest in battle so u win
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we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
^^^liked this punch but u worded it wrong cuz titty feeing doesn't make someon a breast... so your wordplay was off so i can't give ya the props u woulda got with this punch... idk it it was a personal either? and thats not my fault cuz that just means it wasn't direct enough...
no hate... i have no problems voting against bigger names but in this case u lost... please rtf... links in sig

Alrighty now...............Uppin..........................

Voted For: hotshh!

still New, but you? over 2 thousand posts, still aint ''On top''
Twice u finished 3rd, i mean c'mon, who needs 2 Shots?
^^weak opener, punch lacked
ur suppose 2 be ''Hot''..........plz say not one ov da best?
took u 2 years, No more, No Less...
..& look at ur achievements, r we suppose 2 be impressed?
^^not feeling it
we show little 2 no Intrest In-ur-self....its obvious ur Obsessed
''Droppin knowledge''?..lol ''Titty-Feedin'' iz da only tyme ur ''Abreast''*
^^decent punch
You's a MESS, Literally, they gon be scrapin yuh ''Peeled-Cap'' off da Block
Veteran? last tyme ''east met west'' we all kno da ''Big-Man'' Got SHOT
^^nope, wack bar n punch
u cant stop da inevitable, its..lyke college girls, juz ''give it up''
medicine manz syck?..closest he ever got wuz complainin ov a ''Hiccup''
^^nope, didnt connect,setup n punch had no relevetcy together
Lyrikal stick-up, remove hands frum da ''keys'' lyke u dropped ''cocaine''
=End Ov Establishments Reign=
...Theyre addicted 2 my ''Dope''...call hotshh da ''Bird-brain''
^^eh, stretched n needed rewording to be effective
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overall your verse was very choppy n you lacked in decent concepts that were hard hitting, 1 nice bar, you need wordplay that isnt forced in your verse, improve on that, n dont stretch your lines. first 2 bars were pure filler in my opinion.....other then that..average drop

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U got merked twice by Misk, another loss u wouldnt Risk It
Figured cant beat em join em, Then U jumped on his Clicks Dick
^^not really feelin this bar/personal
U Misfit, I switch gears like a Stick Shift, to Kill you Faster
Since when do "Living Legends" make kids " Die with Laughter"?
^^decent punch, funy aspect...
Weak Bastard.....shit, You cant achieve " a Level of Excellence"
So I'll heat you up faster than peppers eaten by Mexicans
^nope, not feelin this hotshh
U couldnt be a "G" with Gotti's Heart, kid drunk on Bacardi Dark
Who thought " Saving Hip Hop" was fixing Dislocated Body Parts!
^^nice, i liked this bar for some reason..
Im breaking your arms, Blocking ya punches, Running Your Bars
You couldnt 'Rep the Hood' If U shouted out the Front of Ya Car
^^ok, decent
I told crews to keep these newbs away........They No Hear Me
Dont hafta drop the 'Z' from ya name, to see Hot Khao Theory
^^best bar n punch/nameplay in the battle, dope
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overall consistent verse, a couple bars i wasnt feeling but you brought alot more above average punches then khaoz
n your closer was pure brilliance, nice drop, closer was the illest...nice drop...

Alrighty now............Someone close this..............

Everyone knows TE has D/R's. Get over it. YOUNG_CITY's votes are explained. And he hasn't voted in all TE vs LL battles.

We don't need to cheat to win, J to the Dot, you can tell hotshh! ripped this kid...

Uppin..

^ :love: me!

werd.

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hotshh!... whats up with Typical voting for ya? :wtf:

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This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

hotshh! killed this

and not with his best stuff either........

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

pollllllllllllllllles
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