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This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses''
he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz'' ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN'' ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL..........Daaaaaaaaaaamn, OWNED Indeph, got nothin' against you, but SHIT....that was nice. Good battle here y'all, good luck in this.. |
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What the fuck Indeph?...how are you pullin this win off? LOL.....SMH |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT... that fake quote,would probably work better when named. ^^Ok personal that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope... yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope. ^^^whack...too simple and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in... nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence. ^^^uncreative...shit's pre-school westside till you die,then after this you are midwest... no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset. ^^^suks Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?... shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez. ^^^whack Ight look.....ur shit flowed nicely and was structured nicely....but ur punches suked.They were too basic."Everyone is at ur level a excellence?".What the hell is dat.That shit's pre-school.Gotta add complexity. Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''* ''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar! ^^that shit's played out to death battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline 0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time! ^^Nice we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses'' he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His ^^ight First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz'' ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN'' ^^whack if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs ..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs ^^whack I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids ^^OK Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow'' shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now ^^ight Look...ur shit was no Dope by any means.But it was better than Indeph.Manly cause you had werdplay and metas or bassically.....complexity which was lost in indeph's verse.U killed him. Vote-khaoz theory(please vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php? |
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werd, nice verse 1ndeph make this bitch bleeddddddddddddd
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Indeph Verse g'luck fam Damn homie you got respect,you a veteran, WAIT... that fake quote,would probably work better when named. ^ Hmm wasn't feelin this as an opener a bit -_- IMO that sig states a quote,that coulda brought up your hope... yeah you could prove me wrong.....if I thought you were dope. ^ again kinda basic diss punch not ooo material fam and there's a lie in the box you supposed to be reppin in... nigga everyone got skills,on your level of excellence. ^ lol nice rhyme punch good in this bar nice diss westside till you die,then after this you are midwest... no more game no more dre,go and listen to dipset. ^ wack...no diss punch non existent Go read a Book, "OF" shouldn't be O-V?... shit,with you O.G's could of meant Oh Geez. ^ nice closer on the OV personal flipped quite good Overall Verse lacked dawg...2 out of 5 bars were good the rest was filler flow and structure were good it was the punches and personals that lacked under average verse IMO KhAoZ ThEoRy Verse Yo!.. Talkin bout ''strap up''?...Rockin a titty cup, Da heat in ur ''Bra''* ''Punch''? ugh, U dont even have da experience 2 serve at a Bar! ^ good opener punch ok diss = there battlin u aint gettin very far, Lyke a Vietnemese on da Frontline 0-0? juz goes 2 show Ya skillz ''premature'' & this aint ur time! ^ diss there 1st line a bit meh 2nd line an hmm punch we go Rhyme 4 Rhyme? so lame dude asked me 2 ''Swap Verses'' he got worried, no propps & it it took him dayz 2 Rehearse-His ^ -_- not feelin it i seen a lot of "took days to" bars First Skriptz, Now U?..........Thanks dude, 4 siggin my ''Sonz'' ur juz ''weak-fun''...claimin ''its so hard'' 2 pull off a ''BIG PUN'' ^ diss there Big Pun name was aight coulda been better though if u own a Gun, stick ya ''trigger finger'' where it Belongs ..then rite b4 u ''pull''..go 'head & listen 2 Nirvana songs ^ diss -_- punch aight but not feelin it majorly I'm not wrong, suicidez ya best Option, lyke Gothic Kids only ''time'' u see'n ''action'' iz watchin old redman Vids ^ punch there but not ooooo but diss ok Verses r hated, handstanin lookin at ''mom'' iz ur only ''wow'' shit ur shamin a legend...change da pic, cuz even he hates u now ^ ok closer diss str8 basic rhyme Overall Again not a great verse you threw more bars into it few more punches more time it looked like you put into this i think you got the win due to more on point punches & personals...but ima comment your vocab is's on some MaRVJay1009 shit lol...drop it if you writing for audio like that then fair nuff but in text you gotta be more understandable coz not everyone writes how you write words like "lyke" & "propps" it would be jus as easy to type "like" & "props" ya feel me... V/KhAoZ ThEoRy...but overall under average verses from both |
This was feedback posted for Indephz
Free upping since Indeph is family................
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thanx mad dog!!!!! uppin diz battleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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khaoz shit is all played! uppin this for indephz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
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yoooooooo, hit diz battle up faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamz
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