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This was feedback posted for K-Trini
 

Leave Ya Lyriks "Unstable",Similiar To A Disabled Being
Have Ya Expiriencing "Horrific Clips",Like The "Scene" Your Gonna Be Fleeing
ok

Throwin Up the "White-Flag",But its Too Late To Surrender
Have Ya Lookin Like a "Bitch",SO I Advice You To--
Change Your Accurate "gender"
ok

the Only Way You Would get "Feed-Back" Is If You Put Your "Stomach" ON Ya Microphone
Cuz Ya "Bars" Is "Weak",Like "Prison Cellz" Made Out Of "Styrofoam"
(Came Below Ma MINIMUM,Cuz You Aint Ready Homie)!
nice ending




Comparing me to you....... is like comparing cursive to print/
Skillfullness at weildin a "axe" still wouldn't give ya "persistance"/
ok but didnt flow well

I got mad beef,but sayin you wack........... is sumtin we can all agree/
You'll commit suicide after masterbating just to "die-nasty"/
weak bar

"Applause" at your concert's like an abandoned house..........only "SILENT"/
"Abrations" in your jowls still couldn't make your spits "violent"/
preety good

Ur shit "clogs" up the air so bad that my ears start to SNEEZE/
Ur rhymes are as "raw" as homeade macaroni and cheese/
haha had me laughin

Wall Street n Twist=a whack ass diss,ya bassicallly burning ya own bridges/
Called "Ghost"?well rightfully so,cause ya songs provide "false images"/
aight

So your supposed to be a ghost,and the 1st. word in ya crew is LIVING?/
You could suck a "pilot's" dick.........but ya still wouldn't head to "elevatin"/
dont rhyme but decent punch

Tryna make a bunch a tough threaths,sayin how you'll lyrically slaughter??/
I'll see bigger splashes from "WHALES" flippin underwater/
decent ending

my vote k trini he was more consistent in punches and mad me laugh

shit i ment to hit post vote can someone change this mistake?

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Voted For: K-Trini

Voted For: Ghost

Leave Ya Lyriks "Unstable",Similiar To A Disabled Being
Have Ya Expiriencing "Horrific Clips",Like The "Scene" Your Gonna Be Fleeing
weak
hrowin Up the "White-Flag",But its Too Late To Surrender
Have Ya Lookin Like a "Bitch",SO I Advice You To--
Change Your Accurate "gender"
aight
he Only Way You Would get "Feed-Back" Is If You Put Your "Stomach" ON Ya Microphone
Cuz Ya "Bars" Is "Weak",Like "Prison Cellz" Made Out Of "Styrofoam"
best bars in the verse

but i think trini got this cause i thought he came harder

my fault i made a mistake while voting so this is my real vote

Comparing me to you....... is like comparing cursive to print/
Skillfullness at weildin a "axe" still wouldn't give ya "persistance"/
aight
I got mad beef,but sayin you wack........... is sumtin we can all agree/
You'll commit suicide after masterbating just to "die-nasty"/
weak
"Applause" at your concert's like an abandoned house..........only "SILENT"/
"Abrations" in your jowls still couldn't make your spits "violent"/
ok
Ur shit "clogs" up the air so bad that my ears start to SNEEZE/
Ur rhymes are as "raw" as homeade macaroni and cheese/
ok
Wall Street n Twist=a whack ass diss,ya bassicallly burning ya own bridges/
Called "Ghost"?well rightfully so,cause ya songs provide "false images"/

So your supposed to be a ghost,and the 1st. word in ya crew is LIVING?/
You could suck a "pilot's" dick.........but ya still wouldn't head to "elevatin"/
nice
Tryna make a bunch a tough threaths,sayin how you'll lyrically slaughter??/
I'll see bigger splashes from "WHALES" flippin underwater/
nice

Leave Ya Lyriks "Unstable",Similiar To A Disabled Being
Have Ya Expiriencing "Horrific Clips",Like The "Scene" Your Gonna Be Fleeing
weak
hrowin Up the "White-Flag",But its Too Late To Surrender
Have Ya Lookin Like a "Bitch",SO I Advice You To--
Change Your Accurate "gender"
aight
he Only Way You Would get "Feed-Back" Is If You Put Your "Stomach" ON Ya Microphone
Cuz Ya "Bars" Is "Weak",Like "Prison Cellz" Made Out Of "Styrofoam"
best bars in the verse

but i think trini got this cause i thought he came harder

Voted For: K-Trini

Aii This is my thoughts

Flow- Ghost ...and his structure was way neater than trini's

Punchez- Trini .....He hade me rollin with some of dem lines I almost pisssed in my pants and his concept was way more original

Personals- Trini Had The only Real Personal With The diss To His crew so Trini Takes that to

Multis- Noone really hade any good multis so this area was absent in this battle

Vocab- Trini Know its not everyday you se someone with good use of vocab but he used it very wisely i shall say in this battle

Originality- Trini He had No Played concepts and no Played punchez he came with some small personals and New Wordplay so therefor that made his verse way more original than Ghost

so my v/ Trini

Sorry But thats jus my feelings peace

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Voted For: K-Trini

Ghost ain't even tight
K-Trini won easily.

I vote for: K-Trini