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Ransum 10-27-07 02:22 PM

Voted For: K.MurD3r


[i]The Kid Got Crazy Spits, Steppin To Me Get Baked-N-Shipped....
This Fake-Is-Shit And I'll 'Screw A Belt To Your Waist' Like 'Replacement Hips'....
nice flow... punch lack'in thou..

Blow Your Chest-In-A-Bag Leave You Restin-Wit-Mags....
This Battle Like A 'Gays Takin A Quiz' The Way Im Testin-This-Fag....
decent... but gay...

Im Prime-Contention So This Kid Certainly Wouldnt Mind-Attention....
But Its A Fact 'Spoken's Not Wanted Here' Like Fuckin 'Mime Conventions!!!'....
good..

This Lame-Detected, One Shot Will Cause Brain-Erections....
Your Not Funny! The Only Time You Got Someone 'Crackin Up' Is Durin 'Caine-Injection!!!'....
lol nice...

This Mayne Get Choke, When I Slice Veins-Wit-Spokes....
And My Bullets'll 'Poke-In-1's(Spoken1)' And Leave His 'Name In Smoke'....
nice name playa nd word playa nd soild ending...

vs

now.. time u "pan" down on wack emcees, like d12 i murder mitten,
only difference ill use a "butchers knive", so its domestic in the "kitchen",
aight...

if my lyrics were straight fire, theorotically speaking i would burn ya,
coz killing off your crew, is the only time u documenting murder,
nah...

like being in a booth, you need different things, like beats with acoustic,
but when u step in, you fuck up the cycle and thats how you murder musik,
aight...

I heard u wanna be a drag queen, but yet u were raised in the ghetto?
does it make u feel bigger when u get raised in your stilletoes,
lol gay but not a good punch...

rappings like riding a bike... you never forget once you grow up,
but u still got stableizers, so i guess thats why this faggot never blew up,
ok ending...

nice battle ya but the winner is k.murder more soild hitting punches with better flow and more creative with a nice bit of multis in there nice battle ya...

Daubs 10-29-07 02:45 PM

This was feedback posted for K.MurD3r
 
checkin why my names mentioned .....................

Cola 10-29-07 06:47 PM

Voted For: K.MurD3r

This battle was pretty damn one sided....Murder staight killed Spkoken one in pretty much every catorgery....nice drop Murder...


This Mayne Get Choke, When I Slice Veins-Wit-Spokes....
And My Bullets'll 'Poke-In-1's(Spoken1)' And Leave His 'Name In Smoke'....


^^ that was the dopest bar of the battle...

good shit tho

Fly-E 10-29-07 07:47 PM

Voted For: K.MurD3r

I say u got my vote u flowed well and u put ur words together good on a scale on 1-10 u got a 7 and ur opponent got a 6 so decent but not great battle if ya'll tryin to get down wit a crew go to the B.E.S.T crew try-out thread!

HELLonEARTH 11-08-07 11:24 PM

Voted For: K.MurD3r

Hmmm.

Spoken1/Provoked: Decent verse. Mildly entertaining punches to start, but it got reallllly weak son. Drag Queen? Stablizers? Really? Like, seriously? Come on now. Make it more personal. Try harder.
Score: 4

K.MurD3r: Funny lines, much more comfortable punches, a lot of personals. Just a solid verse. Done well. Multiple syllable rhyme scheme. Very good.
Score: 7

Sweep. Easily.

T lite 11-15-07 01:00 AM

Voted For: K.MurD3r

Battle was aight. Murder had some pretty good punches, but some that were just multies.

Spoken's verse wasn't bad, but it wasn't great.
Overall, Murder edged Spoken out by a lil bit.

Keep spittin' guys!


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