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lol damn yo... werd.. alot closer...................
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Lmao. It's whatever yo..
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Voted For: Mimesis
ight this was an ok battle here...... mim: ive seen you drop alot better man, so obviously you were a lil rusty in this battle, you did good though, personals were decent some of your punches were good, flow and structure is on point, you should battle more and get to where u were originally..... here is a couple lines i liked... Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali ^^ this made me laugh lol nice punch Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins ^^ anotehr dope punch man i liekd this one the best overall you had a decent verse it was solid in all aspects really, can't complain u did what u needed to do good job. murdz: haha dope use of multies but the punches were weak in this really, they wee talking bout what yuor going to do for example, im gonna shoot you n all that disperce your wig.. that aint really a punch in my eyes so thats why i aint giving this battle to you..... sorry man u did an ight job but it wasn't good enough... pz v/ mim for haveing consistant punches and having a more enjoyable verse plz rtf on my marv battle or this vote gets removed link is in the sig, pz |
thats iight yo.. thanks for the votein..................
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ight yo... think u can hit my marv battle up wit an honest vote for me fam??
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Voted For: Murdz
Mimesis: Nobodys reading your shit.. Still plan to win with ur spit hittin the deck? Even though, He already told me I was going to be leaving.. with a win on my rec Decent Personal..5/10 Why admit that I'll win??... at least you know your gettin ripped in two Cause we're not agitated farmers.. but nobody wants to listen to Mu Ok...4/10 You have no skill son.. custom title admitting that your run down Faggots only a Draft Pick because I'm dropping Murdz in one round Nice..7/10 Having fun now?.. I'm never passed as wack.. They're givin you a rally Cause it speaks for itself when everybody thought you were Lil Cali Blah..This Isn't That Hard Hitting..4/10 I thought I had a challenge.. but Murdz is just another dropped queer Cause you threw a story in Peer Counselor.. ..I'll just throw you off the peer Ok Ok..6/10 Nobody fears you.. Normally I tip my hat, but shit, you cant rap kid I'll just give you mine so you can finally see what's like to cap wins Decent..5/10 Overall: 31/60 Murdz: My Blurted-Spits, Immerse-ya-Bitch, In an Earth-Filled-Ditch while I Traverse-the-Pit Adversely-Sick, I Coerce-this-Kid, To Disperse-his-Wig when his Nerves-go-Twitch Not Really A Punch..But Nice Multis..3/10 Ya Personals Arent ‘Makin-Contact’ Like Retired ‘Baseball Vets’, You Aint-Hittin Mayne-Listen…ill Snatch Ya ‘Necklace’, Brain-Twitchin Now Cuz Ya Chain-Missin!!! First Line Hot, Second Line Sucked..5/10 Mimesis ? My Storm Swarms ya World, Beat you over the Head with Broken-Boards Snatch ya Spits Straight From-ya-Throat and Choke ya with your Own-Vocal-Chords Blah..Not A Punch Just Violent Lines..4/10 I'm Depleting ya Frame,Don't mean problems with Stationary when I say my Ink-will-Run And the Battle's like Shady and Christian Women, Ya chance of Winning is Slim-to-Nun Nice Bar..8/10 this bitch ain't Gangsta, Question if i Carry-Tools, Not aware that I Bury-Fools Mimesis Beating murdz? No Way 'You are not A-Loud' Just like 'Following Library-Rules" Nice..7/10 face it Mimesis You Nervous-Kid Jus A Worthless-Bitch Tryna To Get Into Sum Circuit-Shit Spittin That Hurtful-Shit And Notice you Couldn’t Have A ‘Hot Hand’ Witta Thermal-Grip!!! Decent..6/10 Overall: 33/60 Vote - Murdz...His Last Couple Bars Took This Battle. His Shit Was Consistent and Hot At The End. ~R~ |
This was feedback posted for Mimesis
^i see why you duck me......cuz damn...you suck so mutha fuckin much...dat verse=wackness......but i'm not gonna vote...but if i did it would go to murdz wit no hate...and honesty i thought you would win...lol...but when you grow a decent size balls come see me...~1~
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Lmao. Did you not see the part of my verse where I said "Time to de-rust myself?" I haven't battled in a shit load of time.
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Voted For: Mimesis
Aight...this was close actually...each person has their pros and cons...i basically chose mimesis because he was more on a punchline-personal basis...his punches were directly toward you and in a battle state basically...murdz lines were good with wordplay and vocabulary...but he didnt hit mimesis hard they were mostly threats and didnt feel like you were dissing HIM but instead saying random lines... overall even thought murdz had good wordplay and vocab...he just wasnt going directly toward mim with solid punches like mim was doin... good luck to both no hate peace |
Word. 4-3 Me.
Upping this shit again yo.. Vote up. |
Upping this shit again.
4-3 Me. Word fa real. |
Upping this again.
Somebody just close this shit out already.. |
This was feedback posted for Mimesis
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh u won
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Voted For: Mimesis
Mimesis Dope Shits Man You Came Dope With Your Punches Rhyme Scheme Was Dope Man, You Had A Good Vocabulary In Here Structure Was Cool Man No Worries About That Wordplay Was Dope Here I Liked Alot Of Shits You Had Some Good Personals That Lil Cali Line Ha Ha Nice Man Very Creatibve In This Battle I Think THis Is One Of Your Best Battles, Well Not Quite But Close Enough Man Weerdness Murdz Damn This Was Your Best Verse You Ever Had Man, But Still Was No Match For Mimesis You Came Good But Not Hard Enough Props Though For Taking A Shot At Em Man But You Got To Come Harder Next Time Dude, Punches Was Nice Had Creativity In Here Personals Was Cool Man Wordplay Aiight Shits Dawg Nice Verse Over All Man Vocabulary Can Be Advanced A Little But Ey Nice Man Props To You Vote Mimesis Weerdnesss |
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