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This was feedback posted for E.C
 

Checking the polls good drop E.C..............You too Marv.

Voted For: E.C

E.C=
Nyce verse dawg. good personalz throughout da whole verse, structure wuz flawless..ez 2 read & follow. i wuznt feeling da fish shop line, it wuz weak dawg. ur best bar wuz da steroids bar or ur closer...funny closer 4 real had me lyke ooh, bcuz ov da better personalz u get da vote dawg

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really good concepts in ur punchez, worded & da flow wuz alot better & more complex, but da personalz wuznt there. few good hard punchlinez hit they mark, not az consistant wit da effective disses in ur verse so my vote goes 2 e.c

ur best line wuz da reloaded line, dat wuz a nyce punch an personal dawg

vote=e.c/wordplay wuznt as complex but da punchlinez had more consistancy & da personmalz wuz more effective

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