Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

good punches. I liked it... rtf to my battle sig.. preferably conflict.. thankz peace

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Voted For: vagita4

AHAHAH good battle here... like 2 lil light weight champs at each other... but this has to go to Vege.... had harder punches... good flow... wack structure...wrk on that... ur vocab.. wuz ok... nuttin great.. but good nuff... u took this out cuzza ur punches

Pscho...... ur overall was not that great....
but ur klozer... wuz sooofuckin crack... good stuff...lololol hahaha good punch...

but Vege.. you owned... him good battle ..returnedthe favour aight in my battles below

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”
^^^No......whack
fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain
LOOK,
^^^whack.....dun talk about urself
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!
^^^Shut up..........

U only hadf one punchline and that was the first one.And that one was weak.The rest pf the verse was just you babbling some bullshit about yourself.Stop talking about yourself and just diss that other guy out.

For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape
^^^NO....played as fuck...
Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL
^^OK.............
Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks
^^^OK........

Besides the first one.....the other part of your verse was OK.U didn't get carried away and started talking about yourself.That first line is played.Try to get fresh wordplay and get some more peronsals

Vote-Phychobabble

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yo that was hot i like the word play and punchlines

Voted For: vagita4

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”

This was weak, no concept or punch there, just stated stuff

fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain

Nice multi's, but the wording was terrible in the second line and no real punch

LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!

Creativity was decent, but without the explanation I wouldn't have realised, try and word it so a reader would get it straight away


For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape

Weak, if you'd have changed the I to he it would have been better

Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL

Concept wasn't good and neither was wording

Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks

This was alright actually, good wordplay with genes father, but not worded very well

Quite close really, it was vagita's multi's vs psycho's closer...I think vagita took it cos psycho's closer didn't make all that much sense aside from the wordplay.

V/ vagita

Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

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upp'in to end this battle plez vote and explain it cuz someone might get them deleted

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Voted For: vagita4

PsyChoBabbLe
for Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape
^Ok opener, weak punch still 3/10^
Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL
^Weak punch, no creativity 0/10^
Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks
^UMM weak closer had no flow no punch 0/10^
OVERALL:Ur verse did not flow well, ur lines was sorta stretched and u had no effective punches in ur verse, i felt ur personals were not effective and ur verse was basic with nnothing to attack ur opponent with.

Criminal
u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”
^Show a link to were he freeposted, or its a fake personal 0/10^
fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain
^Thats like self glor. But good punch at that 5/10^
LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!
^pretty good wordplay good ending and punch 6/10^
OVERALL:Ur verse was enjoyable to read simply for its good flow and somewhat good personals and punches....Ur structure was quite off but i was still able to catch a good flow and connecct the dots to all of ur strong points in ur verse...And thats why ur verse takes the batttle

V/CRIMINAL

rtf on my sig links, in 3 days or this vote will be removed....have a nice day :thumbup: