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M-Eazy 06-28-05 05:59 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by T.r.oo.P
Voted For: Mimesis

[I]
You not a gangsta, ya 'lifestyles' like 'condomns', all about 'safety'
U aint convincing, you hella 'skinny', so we kno u aint 'taste beef'
1/10....Fuck No....i kno u wish u didnt put this

U scrambling out shots, so we kno 'mimesis' searching for fame
43 wins from herbish lame but yo 'semi-mis' me just like your name
1/10.....Another Fuck No...

U can't catch up to me, I'm fast....u should take a lil rest
I'll snatch ya tongue out, then throw it back to u, so u'll catch ya breathe
2/10...And still your Blowing it

cut my brain to see my thought, theres yo advantage bitch
u could put yo feet where yo asshole is, and still wont run shit
5/10....Better concept and attack

i think u should put a knife in yo rhyme book, and when you spit, we'll fear it
cause even witta mouth full of 'peanuts', you wouldnt be 'roastin' lyrics

6/10...Ok closer


Ok umm..elevation elevation elevation elevation

thats bout all u need
get ya multies...simi's...Punches u have the concept
but go read some vets battlez and u will catch on
personals...ok..coulda did some research tho cuz
open and closes were weak

without a 1st and last impression...more than
likely your gonna get ya opponents post vote
buttons pushed...


Fuck bluffing skills.. cant run a crew.. accept that you be nothing
Cause you can't be a Living Legend until you succeed in SOMETHING
4/10....ok

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I'm dumping your shit son.. and now everybody's watching see,
It's like I'm talking in third person the way I'm just dropping M-E

2/10....Bad set and delivery kid

You be garbage.. I'm typin hotness while you be waiting son
Cause after I urn my win.. I'll just put your damn remains in one

5/10...nice pickup and quick punch...coulda been worded diff

You suck son.. with your fake sig.. fag, get to walkin dude
Now you're the best kept secret?
..Man, it's just cause nobody wants to talk to you
4/10.....Blah.......no comment

Flocking to dr.. but ill still lay the smack down, nobody be lovin you
Fuck, I ain't buying wrestling leagues but I'll still take the ECW
5/10.....Eh better closer than your comp

[B]
Seen better from u ...
Far from one of your bests

i think u kinda knew your opponent
was sorta weak..so u didnt try
well atleast i hope so

punches were aight...had the concept
lil inconsistent
structure was ok...i dont do the whole 3
line concept...but it works i guess
personals..werent really ther
similies and metas were good

overall it was vet ova rook

V/Mim




Vets on a internet site means they have no life. Take yourself for example. You call urself a vet. How pathetic.

:laugh:

Magic5 06-28-05 08:09 PM

Thanks for that peice of commentary.

:headbang:

Magic5 06-29-05 01:42 AM

God damn. This shit is taking forever to get closed.

Magic5 06-30-05 04:50 AM

Somebody fucking close this shit already.

This is taking forever.

K-Trini 06-30-05 03:44 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
checkin polls.......................................

Magic5 07-01-05 02:32 AM

Upping this shit yet again.

Drop your votes all up in this.

Magic5 07-01-05 04:08 PM

Somebody vote and close this shit.

Upping.......

Magic5 07-01-05 08:16 PM

Somebody close this shit.

Vote the fuck up.....

Magic5 07-02-05 01:44 AM

Upping this again.

Vote the fuck up.

Fa real..

Magic5 07-02-05 05:30 AM

Close this motherfucking shit already.

Vote the fuck up.

Magic5 07-09-05 08:47 PM

Upping this shit.

Somebody fucking close this already.

Magic5 07-10-05 04:58 PM

Somebody fucking close this.

This is getting annoying..

Texxus 07-10-05 07:28 PM

Voted For: M-Eazy

Fuck bluffing skills.. cant run a crew.. accept that you be nothing
Cause you can't be a Living Legend until you succeed in SOMETHING
[/B]nice opener...7/10
I'm dumping your shit son.. and now everybody's watching see,
It's like I'm talking in third person the way I'm just dropping M-E
^^[/B]Pretty good...7/10
You be garbage.. I'm typin hotness while you be waiting son
Cause after I urn my win.. I'll just put your damn remains in one
Wasnt feelin it....3/10
You suck son.. with your fake sig.. fag, get to walkin dude
Now you're the best kept secret?
..Man, it's just cause nobody wants to talk to you
Weak....5/10
Flocking to dr.. but ill still lay the smack down, nobody be lovin you
Fuck, I ain't buying wrestling leagues but I'll still take the ECW
Dope punch...good closer...9/10
overall your verse was off and on good..vocab was nicely used and flow was on point but some of your punches coulda been worded better....
overall-31/50

You not a gangsta, ya 'lifestyles' like 'condomns', all about 'safety'
U aint convincing, you hella 'skinny', so we kno u aint 'taste beef'
Pretty Decent..ok opener..6/10
U scrambling out shots, so we kno 'mimesis' searching for fame
43 wins from herbish lame but yo 'semi-mis' me just like your name
hot punch..im likin...10/10
U can't catch up to me, I'm fast....u should take a lil rest
I'll snatch ya tongue out, then throw it back to u, so u'll catch ya breathe
alright..seemed stretched...5/10
cut my brain to see my thought, theres yo advantage bitch
u could put yo feet where yo asshole is, and still wont run shit
1stline was dope 2nd was gay...OK...6/10
i think u should put a knife in yo rhyme book, and when you spit, we'll fear it
cause even witta mouth full of 'peanuts', you wouldnt be 'roastin' lyrics
decent closer...6/10

really your verse had like 2 or 3 good punches and the rest was noob style...vocab was well played...flow was ok and some parts were stretched...
overall-33/50[B]

vote-M-EAZY

Magic5 07-10-05 08:10 PM

ROFLLLMFAO HAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA

"noob style"

Get the fuck outta here..

King Solo 07-10-05 10:47 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

Fuck bluffing skills.. cant run a crew.. accept that you be nothing
Cause you can't be a Living Legend until you succeed in SOMETHING
7...decent opener, a nice, and original personal on the crew name, also funny to.
I'm dumping your shit son.. and now everybody's watching see,
It's like I'm talking in third person the way I'm just dropping M-E
6...this bar, not so good, i get the third person concept for the punch, but i don't think you used it as well as you cud.
You be garbage.. I'm typin hotness while you be waiting son
Cause after I urn my win.. I'll just put your damn remains in one
6...again the concept not used to full affect, still a little funny but cud be better.
You suck son.. with your fake sig.. fag, get to walkin dude
Now you're the best kept secret?
..Man, it's just cause nobody wants to talk to you
7...decent shit, like the opener you had the real comical element in the punch which i always enjoy.
Flocking to dr.. but ill still lay the smack down, nobody be lovin you
Fuck, I ain't buying wrestling leagues but I'll still take the ECW
6...good closer, the whole wrestling idea was used good especially at the end of the bar with the easy-W (ECW).

OVERALL: 32/50



You not a gangsta, ya 'lifestyles' like 'condomns', all about 'safety'
U aint convincing, you hella 'skinny', so we kno u aint 'taste beef'
5...not good, new spin on a played concept but still weak, the first line especially and the set-up was irrelevant to the punch.
U scrambling out shots, so we kno 'mimesis' searching for fame
43 wins from herbish lame but yo 'semi-mis' me just like your name
6...better, although the way you switched his name around wasn't all that creative in its usage.
U can't catch up to me, I'm fast....u should take a lil rest
I'll snatch ya tongue out, then throw it back to u, so u'll catch ya breathe
5...weak again, first line was far too basic and the 2nd line concept has been done before, i know cuz i've used it before.
cut my brain to see my thought, theres yo advantage bitch
u could put yo feet where yo asshole is, and still wont run shit
5...run shit concept has been used too many times, especially on marvjay......again bar was basic and lacked in a bit of everything really.
i think u should put a knife in yo rhyme book, and when you spit, we'll fear it
cause even witta mouth full of 'peanuts', you wouldnt be 'roastin' lyrics
6...first line wasn't all that good, 2nd line made up for it even though the concept was mildly good.

OVERALL: 27/50



both verses were consistent, mimesis just had harder hitting punches and a couple of bars that were real comical and made me laugh. nothing from m-eazy really stood out to me and I think that you relied on what wordplay you used to win, but the punches were not really that affective.

V/ - Mimesis

RTF on the battle link in my siggy. :thumbup:


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