| Dickard. |
09-25-05 08:15 PM |
Voted For: §ick§eed
sickseed-ur verse was dope, u had good structure hott hott punches and good personals...i feel you had 1 played line but other than that you had a very hardhitting verse that was presented well...i suggest u take another step and try to insert multis..just cuz it would be cooler
younge-your verse was structured bad, it wasnt able to catch a good flow, i think u should up on that.... your punches were sub par..nothing to special..ur personals were lacking and kinda played...ur vocab was not cool......lol up on that....overall u need a lot of work
v/sickseed
rtf on one of my sig links man......1
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