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Voted For: criminal
Structure-Both had poorly presented structures, this is a problem simply becuz the reader needs to create a flow but that is almost impossible with very poor structure. Vocab-I see no vocab in this battle what so ever, how ever this would not be an issue if both verses were intacted with good punches and fufilling multis....... Multis-Both also lacked multis on both sides, this is good to have them so it will enhnace ur flow...and make it more enjoyable to read....both up on ur multis....got a lot of elevation to do Personals-Both had good personals but CRIMINALs personals were the most effective and noticeable.M.C. had ok personals but i wasnt feeling that they were presented in a way that could be respected. Punches-Clear to see that criminal had the more enhnaced punches that hit hard, M.C. u need to up on ur whole verse present it with fresh punches....... Originality-Criminal took this with his straight up fresh punches and personals....couldnt give the vote to anyone else. v/criminal rtf in 3 days in my sig links or this vote will be dqd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: M.C.
M.C. - You had an iight flow, punches were decent. Best Line - But, fucka of beating, I’ll literally smash this dude If this verse is wack.. ..then you actually have nothing to lose Worst Line - Weak punches is all you carry, there not going to hit “This is only the beginning,”.. ..but you don’t have nothing to begin with* criminal - You had iight flow, some attempts at wordplay, and ok punches. Best Line - It’s Insane I Became-Rap's-New-Don… maybe cuz, the only time ya “text could SCAR me forever” is if i got your Name-TATTOO’D-ON!!!... Worst Line - Most who are REAL feel my flow, but I always Knew-More-Cowards-Doubted-It * M.C * but I’ll STILL “put ya lights out” on a larger scale than “New-York-Power-Outages”! OVERALL - This was a close battle but I have to give my vote to M.C. He had some iight wordplay, and some decent punches. Criminal your punches wernt all that great and your wordplay was weak. Vote - M.C RTF in SIG |
Voted For: criminal
this was actually yet another very weak battle... *smh* oh well... still criminal easily had the better verse here... MC's verse was just one played concept after another, which made for a very lack luster verse... Opener: Crim Closer: Crim Punches: Crim Personals: none to speak of Structure: Crim Vote: Crim |
Voted For: criminal
-This is an L*F*S* Review- Meh. criminal Most who are REAL feel my flow, but I always Knew-More-Cowards-Doubted-It * M.C * but I’ll STILL “put ya lights out” on a larger scale than “New-York-Power-Outages”! Pretty good. ya skills a joke better known as a FAGGOT clowns, this Wacky-Coward’s-Bars-is-Girly Whether you planned on “getting messed up” or not, Happy-Hour’s-Startin-EARLY! lol I like it. It’s Insane I Became-Rap's-New-Don… maybe cuz, the only time ya “text could SCAR me forever” is if i got your Name-TATTOO’D-ON!!!... Cool closer M.C. Weak punches is all you carry, there not going to hit “This is only the beginning,”.. ..but you don’t have nothing to begin with* aiight Cool. But, fucka of beating, I’ll literally smash this dude If this verse is wack.. ..then you actually have nothing to lose Meh. You have no skillz, and this is why someone needs to.. Quote: Originally Posted by criminal BANND THIS FUCKING PRICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Nah. Nice try though. Overall: THis was a dcent battle. Criminal had more consistency in his verse. Both had good punches here and there but Crim's were thruout the hole verese, whereas MC got hot later. Word. v/criminal |
Voted For: M.C.
criminal Most who are REAL feel my flow, but I always Knew-More-Cowards-Doubted-It * M.C * but I’ll STILL “put ya lights out” on a larger scale than “New-York-Power-Outages”! Not feeling... ya skills a joke better known as a FAGGOT clowns, this Wacky-Coward’s-Bars-is-Girly Whether you planned on “getting messed up” or not, Happy-Hour’s-Startin-EARLY! Nah... It’s Insane I Became-Rap's-New-Don… maybe cuz, the only time ya “text could SCAR me forever” is if i got your Name-TATTOO’D-ON!!!... Nice attempt.. vs. M.C. Weak punches is all you carry, there not going to hit “This is only the beginning,”.. ..but you don’t have nothing to begin with* Nah... But, fucka of beating, I’ll literally smash this dude If this verse is wack.. ..then you actually have nothing to lose Not bad.. Told me to bring my a-game, yeah, but you won’t bring shit* You have no skillz, and this is why someone needs to.. No... Vote:M.C. This battle sucked, but his half decent line was better than criminals half decent line. |
Voted For: M.C.
i voted for mc he had better punches and flow and structure crim u had ok rymes but u could do better no hate thou rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=221364 |
Voted For: M.C.
Criminal Most who are REAL feel my flow, but I always Knew-More-Cowards-Doubted-It * M.C * but I’ll STILL “put ya lights out” on a larger scale than “New-York-Power-Outages”! Played like shit ya skills a joke better known as a FAGGOT clowns, this Wacky-Coward’s-Bars-is-Girly Whether you planned on “getting messed up” or not, Happy-Hour’s-Startin-EARLY! Decent It’s Insane I Became-Rap's-New-Don… maybe cuz, the only time ya “text could SCAR me forever” is if i got your Name-TATTOO’D-ON!!!... Could of have been better and would have won the battle for you but ohwell M.C. Weak punches is all you carry, there not going to hit “This is only the beginning,”.. ..but you don’t have nothing to begin with* This one was the best punch i seen out this whole battle But, fucka of beating, I’ll literally smash this dude If this verse is wack.. ..then you actually have nothing to lose it was alright Told me to bring my a-game, yeah, but you won’t bring shit* You have no skillz, and this is why someone needs to.. BAnnd this prick ^^^ never mind this was the best one nice use of a quote kid This won it for you Vote-M.C. |
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