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Voted For: Stanza

this was a igght battle here......

ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where

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Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"


stanza had better punches and they were better concepts and more thought of, thats y i'm giving this to him.... bliss work on your structure and syllable count

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Voted For: Stanza

gud opening-stanza-Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"

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bad closing-stanzaThis Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"

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syllable count? gotta be kidding me....eh, whatever...last dudes vote is gettin removed though...pretty whack

i wish whack people didn't vote

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Voted For: Stanza

damn, nice shit stanza

Personals - Neither really won
Punches - Stanza by a mile
Multis - neither really won
Metas - Stanza -- this was nice...
Structure - Stanza
Entertainment - Stanza

Sorry, Stanza just won all the way around...

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Voted For: Stanza

v/ stanza

let me break it down

personals went to Stanza because he had better DTO meaning damage to opponent.

"Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"

is way bettern than

ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem

becuase the multi in Bliss's was forced and his structure was off

personals was included with stanza's punches becuase they both had personals but Stanza had better punches to back his up

multis went to nobody because Bliss was the only one with them and they seemed forced

word play went to Stanza because he had bigger words rhyming with the same lenght and number of syllables as before

overall vote V/ STANZA

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blisss......punches were kind of weak and u didnt stay wit consistant with the punches....your creativity was lackin a lil bit...your coulda fixed da structure a lil bit like re-word some things to make it all flow and transition better....

stanza-good creativity to start off wit...punches could have been a lil harder but it got the job done this time....the game line was nice lol....

v/stanza

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