uppin this fo votes cmon pplz.....................

can we get some fuccin votes???? shit!!! we will return the favor!!!
uppin

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

You win because you had punches and flow and your lines made sense.

Verse: what a site it is seeing you question my credibility//
the city i rep makes florida a jelly bean//
your profusly stupid without a taste in music//
this cock raps without punchlines like slapboxing roosters

^this made no sense to me, had no punches, and didnt even rhyme. the city i rep makes florida look like a jelly been? wtff..
that line was wack as shit. then you just post random sentances TRYING to diss him that dont even rhyme

Pen'N Paper.. you need mad work on your wordplay. your lines were longer than stretch armstrong. however, you did make frequent attempts at similies and metaphors, and flow was there, actually looked like a rap. pz.

thnx for voting uppin this for more votes plz.......

This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
 

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Verse -
ok this waz hapnin'.. nice personals n punchlines but yo flow was fucked up, no creativity, there wus a forced rhyme (that's bad)

Pen -
whoa! nice punchlines, creative punches, but still gotta fix that struture

opener - tie
closing - Pen

fav lines:
Verse:
"its humerous cause hell probably stay true to his intergers//
last time i check, hes 0-9, getting SWITCHED like his signatures"

Pen:
"Just face it man ur a piece of shit, ur compared to acid cuz u a waste
Tryin to start e-beef but he aint got no guts, so he gots his intestines to taste"

CONCLUSION
both had great personals but pen n paper's wuz more hard hittin' no hate...

V/ Pen

aight thnx for voting uppin this..................3-0 will be a k.o.

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uppin dammit vtes plz.............................

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Pen N' Paper- your verse was pretty good...yo punches were good but didnt seem good lets just say decent...but they were good enough to win...your structure was blah...easy to read n all...could be fixed up a little bit...had some nice personals up there....but overall- 7.9/10...You got this battle with just simple and wayyyy better punches...

Verse190- your verse was aight, but seemed like a 10 year old raps like that seriously...yo punches were decent...nothing speical i saw...they didnt seem to hit hard or connect well...yo structure was good...but elevate on punches kid seriously...overall-5.0/10...Just elevate n all you'll get better hoepfully...

this is so hilarious. well, you can bet i wont be on this site again. you talked about how i only had like 100 posts, and this is why. i though maybe people would get their heads out they ass and reckognize puchlines, multies and flow, but i guess not. no hate, enjoy the victory.

ohhh ok then so u talk alot of sit and i merked u......lol this battle is closed......lol agree wit it then.......K.O.

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ok i saw ur post then i guess this is closed then ill get it closed now

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yo verse plz state here that u got k.o. so i can close this out ok 1