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SkY hIgH sKiLlZ 09-08-05 06:46 PM

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 
checkin the pollllsssss my niggas...............................

Young_law 09-21-05 01:26 PM

Voted For: DoContinue

L.I. came good but really didnt have to many personals, good structure and some nice punches but DoContinue came wit dat good wordplay, i especially liked tha last line shyt was raw as fuck, DoContinue gets tha vote

J. Luth 09-27-05 09:10 PM

Voted For: L.I.

aiight let's see:

L.I.

ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
lol word, that's tight....... 7/10
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
word, nice....... 6/10
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
ehh.... wtf, son? quit rap fo reel....... 2/10
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
lol..... word nice closer........ 6/10

overall, you had a coo verse....... could have been better tho........ 23/40

DC:
this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.
eh..... ok............ 4/10
seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane
ehh..... shit's kinda played......... 4/10
mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment
lol this was coo.............. 7/10
couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.
ehh........ not that great......... 4/10

overall you really didn't have anything that amazing. Could have been better. good try tho........ 19/23

v/L.I.


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