its a lot simple like my punches, i'd say 6/10 its affective but it depends if you got a personal for the first line

I get it but its an old concept.

its awfull.... forced as fuck dooms put it best to u.. dont force lines just put em blunt n straight to da point it works more effectively

thanks again people. i realize its not the best punchline ever, but i knew it made sense. thats why i got so frustrated when that Gongshow person voted against me because he said that line made no sense, along with the rest of my verse. he actually suggested for me to start this thread... thanks agian people

yea man u made sense but like it didnt rhyme thats all........it was good

it wasnt an exact rhyme, but it had that strong vowel sound to go with music.
yeah, you right, it dont really rhyme lol. but thats what happens with off the tops sometimes.

yea i unda stand yea thats tru and yo do u want that battle to be 3-0 k.o. or do u want to go all 5 dammit.....lol

all 5, cause i never heard of that 3-0 thing. plus i gotta feeling that aint no one gonna vote on mine till the end, cause thats how its looking

i think its wack?!?!?

of course u havent hurr it u a :noob:

You actually thought that was good?
Wow.

it doesnt make complete sense..

hmm. well, ive heard enough. i appreciate those who use there brain and posted real feedback, and feel bad for the preppys who love this site. i really wish ya would stop associating yourselves with hip hop. your the reason people like dr. phil and bill o riely talk shit on rap. as far as those half cocked opinions, keep em. i really would rather you stay looking stupid and be genuine than to see you switch it up on yourselves and assimilate yet another aspect of hip hop culture; knowledge. you prolly wont see me on this site because like alot of other people, imma really find something better to do, seeing as how like only 10% of you do anything for this site. feel free to talk more shit, god knows logic wont stop you...

it makes sense

but frankly i dont give a fuck anyway

yea king y no vote on that battle anyways......lol