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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
 

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless


Verbal:

Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex
Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex!

Setup was nice...u set it up nicely then flopped big time on the punch/personal.....wtf son....if u had followed that setup wit a witty personal u woulda won rite there.

Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem
Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen!

Again nice personalized setup then another "WTF?" on the punch...an no its not a "I dun get it" wtf...its a "u can't be serious" wtf....come on son that was weak as hell

Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat
c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin!

Setup this time was blah....an where is the punch...everyone knows he be banned....you jus making a statement...no wordplay...no flip....where is the punch!!!!?

Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun
playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' ''

Setup is seriously blah...an so was punch...absolutely nothing in this bar whatsoever..I aint even gon explain dat shit

my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field
only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed!

Setup was first similie a.k.a punchline u used all battle an it was wack as hell..then the punch was weak....I see where u were going but u worded it horribly...it didn't connect at all an even if it did it was a weak/played concept...u seriously gotta up ya game son


Spul:

Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help
You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself

Ok setup was ok....punch was wack as hell....I see u attempted to use a nice flip but u fucked it up badly

I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm
Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film

Setup was personalized not saying much but would be effective if punch hits...but it didn't...shit was weak as fuck....wtf? son...dat was terrible

Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat
I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back

Setup coulda been better...punch was very basic but personalized an sumwhat funny....but still wack but also 100 times better than ya previous bars

Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot
I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top?

Setup was worded horribly...as well as punch...an the wording of this bar killed any chance of it being the semi-wack bar it woulda ended up being

Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place
But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face

Setup personalized--->good thing...then punch....lmao....ah'ight this wasn't anything spectacular at all but it was comical an its the first bar throughout whole better that got a reaction out of me that wasn't a frown....so sadly this barely decent bar is what won you the battle IMO.


Overal: Both yall dropped shitty verses....saying it was keyed is a cop out...if u cant think of witty shit on the spot..simply dun key shit...I hope shit u think about looks better than this cuz both of you were horrible...I aint gon sugarcoat it or none of that....this was trash on both sides but somebody gotta win so I gave it to spul for his somewhat comical closer.

Vote: Spul

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

well u had personals and they were funny good flow i can see u didnt really try so work on ur vocab lol and add saome more pesonals straight verse
verbal ur punches sucked u need to work on ur personals and like spul u need to work on ur vocab but straight verse

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help
You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself
LOL GOOD OPENER 8/10
I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm
Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film
DECENT FOLLOW 6/10
Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat
I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back
HAHA NICE INSULT 8/10
Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot
I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top?
OHHH 9/10
Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place
But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face
GOOD BAR 7/10



Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex
Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex!
NICE OPENER 6/10
Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem
Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen!
OHHHHHH NICE...9/10
Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat
c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin!
NAH, BEEN SAID TOO MUCH 5/10
Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun
playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' ''
DECENT STATEMENT, NO PUNCH 6/10
my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field
only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed!
DECENT 6/10



BOTH YA CAME WITH SOLID VERSES, SHOOTA FELL OFF AT THE END, BUT SPUL HAD THE PICS TO HIS ADVANTAGE AND USED THEM FOR NICE PERSONALS, OVERALL I ENJOYED HIS VERSE BETTER

aiight thanks for vote.......... uppppppppppi........................

This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
 

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This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

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