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uppin dis mutha............................................. ..dis voting shit is getting ridcioulous

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This was feedback posted for (X)eed
 

ummmmm............................................ .improved?

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werd////// u owned me here dollar....good shit..i need to wrk on my .... overall shit... lol..haha hey fuck ive imprved frm the past...good stufff ...a good oppenent always imprves me. ... u tought me sum good stuff Dollar.... aiiight...keep it goin ... ...... a legend is bein created......werd

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ay man apreciate da battle man u did good ithink and no problem on ya end and keep doing ya thang and im a keep doing my thang peace

i wud vote for Young dollar but it says i cant vote for sum reason lol, probly cuz it's the elevated front lines. but yer anywayz, YD took this i rekon both had gud verses but this woz one of the best verses YD's dun.

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Voted For: (X)eed

Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil
—okay, decent use on his name & anotha’s
And I can tell you really got this rap Game bent up and twisted
Just cuz ya gota Banks Mixtape, Dont mean ya Lyricaly Gifted
—weak
Homie you aint really real like Saint Nick livin in the North Pole
Ya workin Salvation Army shifts is da only way ya own my Sole(Soul)
—decent
N you just some fat boy in ya mommas basement out of the states
Get liposucktion,Mix wit coke,smuggel it in,still cant slang ya weight
—nah, wack
Can't beleive you said you kick up dust and cough till ya stir up spit
U can be CuriousGeorge N toss monkey fetus Nstill not stir up hot shit
—decent
Like you got black bags to your lips, Talkin trash aint gonna get that Far
Because for Dollar, I got you on Smash, Like broken cars at a Junk Yard
—weak closer


Hes got his first note, decides to save it into the "PIGGY"
The child's lost.........this battle too, like "babe pig in the city"
—okay opener
playin his coins safe....................... livin life as a gamble
He has lost it all,please free fone "1-800 MY LIFE'S A SCANDAL
—nope
He Prays, & wants to be like "50Cent" dreams to become huge
he aint even "half that" and still "lives in the Cube"
—almost
"living outside the square" he trys to become famous
the only thing seperatin this child from Fame is his Anus
—almost
Like Donald Trump says ....... "dollar you're fired"
ooooops i made a mistake the kid wasnt even hired
—decent
despite the man's fate he never be a "young buck"
"straight outta trashville" he dont have nuff money for his Bus
—pretty decent, ur best punch
Winnin' for him is like a streak at the lottery
"and the winner is" young dollar for the best role of Comedy
—hah, okay here
see you comin at me is like the dollar witout the sign
the kid's "bankrupt" i "loaned" him the verse hes about to type
—sign & type hardly rhyme, nice try w/ the slant-rhyme though

Y.D. – overall u was aight here, structure was okay, the flow
kinda lack’d here, personas were there.. but them punches were
lackin here. some of them didn’t quite land here, and some of them
did. but overall elevate on those punches

(X) – overall u was aight here too, structure was aight.. the flow
was actually decent here, sorta on point, didn’t see any personals
here, better add some in battles more often, and the punches were
connecting here. u came harder than Y.D. in this battle w/ the
punches here though

alright uppin.........and i'll take dem P.O.V.'s as advice and work on my shyt man.....uppin dis

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