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Fucking Uppin this motherfucker :)

Uppin this fag....................................

Voted For: Tweety

Flow-Tweety....both had a lil basic rhyme sheme.But tweety had a ton of internals that made it good.Black magic...basic rhyme ...no-no..

wording-tweety because black magik's wording was newbish.HIs shit just didn't connect as well.

concepts-even...I think both of you didn't have a concept that was good enough.ANd plus..this topic was rendundant.I've heard it a million times.

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Uppin.............................................

Voted For: Tweety

Black Magik - Your verse was very well written i think there were places in it that you fell off like your emotion was there you could see it but at the same time i believe you ould have came harder in that aspect your imagery was decent throughout your verse and overall it was a average piece

Tweety - Well ....Your verse was very good I haven't read a lot of your topicals but this showed your potential and overall ability to write a nice emotional , and very good imaged piece. I believe the way you came at this topic was what got you my vote very different in my eyes and that usually is where good topical battlers lie ..in their indifferences from the norm...but Your piece was more than good to take this battle

Overall - Good Battle by both Black keep it up, and Tweety keep holding it down...

My Vote - Tweety

Tweety, go ahead and get this closed..............

Cool, I'll get @ Strobe to get this closed..........