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^^^^^^^ ur sig messes with my eyes................
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Voted For: New Meth0d
New Meth0d you aint street now go back to the burbs they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs 7. Lol. This was good. you can pray to god that you hope to win shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian 5. Seen the concept before. Still cool though. i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props 6. Haha. Pretty good shit. he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none 3. Nah.. you schemin to win, theres no way man dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans 4. Second line is stretched. Concept was decent. id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk 5. Ehh.. Decent punch. Doesn't hit that hard though. Overall - 30 Chameleon My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??... I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters... 2. Concept is played. Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor... Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters... 0. Self glorifying is wack. I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate... This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate... 2. Worded horribly though. U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero... Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios... 1. Wow @ how stretched this is. Cheerio/hole concepts are played too. I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple... U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles... 1. Played shit again. Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write... It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life... 4. The first line of yours that was actually worded good. Overall - 10 Vote - New Meth0d |
This was feedback posted for New Meth0d
ayo new meth nice verse man..u killed him............
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Voted For: Chameleon
Man Chameleons flowed together more, had harder punches, structured better and more enjoyable. New Method had some decent punches in there but overall I would say Chameleon won this.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
werd upping.........................................
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Yeah Uppin...Dont wanna get your first loss...........
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i know you aimed for votes i have the convo proving it but im not gonna get you banned....it was cool how you aimed DQ, i have her admiting that you aimed her....but im a nice guy and gonna let it slide
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Voted For: Chameleon
i pick u Chameleon cuzc your punches were better ur lines were kinda played method no hate though.......so v/chameleon....rtf by feedback on my o/m Masked Disguise Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: New Meth0d
ok Method jsut punches hella hard and creative but he did slip off towards the end a lil bit, Chameleon ur punches were sorta good but they need to be reworded and dont use punches like with cheerios cuz u need to be mean in a battle man. Method u need to fix ya structure, it works good but it dont look good, ya hear me? but yeah V/New Method for way better and funnier punches...please vote on the battles in my sig |
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Voted For: Chameleon
My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??... I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters... ^^OK punch....better flow... Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor... Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters... ^^No punch.....but dope multi I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate... This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate... ^^FLow was good...but punch lacked.. U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero... Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios... ^^LMAO....DOPE...creative..hard hittin...multi...10/10 I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple... U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles... ^^internal seemed forced Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write... It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life ^^NO punch Seems to me you basing it all on multis and flow.And your not concentrating on punches.Your best line was the cherrios one....but aside from it...there wasn't much eye-opening one.You had flow...but not punches.WOrdplay and metas. you aint street now go back to the burbs they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs ^^basic and whack..... you can pray to god that you hope to win shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian ^^Flow bad ans punch sucked i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props ^^Hmm....OK....5/10 he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none ^^HM....Ok again...6/10 you schemin to win, theres no way man dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans ^^No.... id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk ^^NO... Only 2 good punches that I've seen.You were just a lil newbish with some of the punches.Like the Chameleon/herbs...basic as fuck.Use wordplay and metas...and stop with the basic rhyme sheme.Use multis. Vote-Chameleon RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203166 |
This was feedback posted for New Meth0d
both verses were weak...
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This was feedback posted for Chameleon
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