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Voted For: Daubs
Ok lets breaK it down: all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load ^^^ This was a hot line the wordplay and the creativity was really good....5/5 crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book ^^^^ Not too great I saw what you were gettin at but it wasnt great 2/5 leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam* ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne ^^^ Funny line (1st) but 2nd wasnt too great.....4/5 deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle ^^^good try but wheres the punch....1/5 sorry cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel *HE's only leader of living legends because M-Easy left ^^^ Ok decent I see the punch not too hard IP: Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol.. Theorietically speaking.. Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!! ^ HAHAHAHA THIS WAS SO CREATIVE....brilliant use....5/5 Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it.. And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet.. ^^ Sorry but the first line I didnt like its too played seemd like a filler but the second was decent but also seen that shit...2/5 Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers.. & RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears.. ^^ This was good....kinda self gory but good wordplay and use...3/5 You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen.. Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician.. ^^^ I like this line liked the creativity and wordplay...4/5 Macreep: Ok stuff, Ive seen much better....keep up Daubs: Nice shit there dawg....you got it hard...nice battle between us btw Daubs gets this...RTF on my battle with Lawless or this vote will be removed http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199248 |
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Voted For: Daubs
Flow-Daubs,both had a nice flow..but Daubs just edged him out a bit. Punches-Now..this was a tough choice.I think Macreep's play off personals in every bar was nice.But daubs was just more creative and such.Had more metas and wordplay Personals-Clearly Macreep....had one in every bar.I like that a lot. Multis-Like personals...Macreep had a multi in every bar shake the road/take the load..cigarette crook...alphabeth book....mother's foam....another's throne....glass circle....surpass Urkel.... I think Macreep can be something special with a little more pack in his punch. Originality-Clearly Daubs...it loooked like Macreep spent more time gathering personals than making the punch. Vote-Daubs...close battle |
Ite thanks for the feedback, will keep it in mind.
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Voted For: Daubs
Good battle..i liked this alot.... Battle Breakdown= Mutlis= Daubs Punches- very closed..but votin on "Daubs" Personals- MaCrep Metas= Daubs Vocab- Daubs Complexity- Daubs structure- MaCrep this battle was every close in my perspective...but I feel like Daubs came just a little harder...cuz he went all out on his verse and the Whole lazy court cases afta diz u'll b sue-is-idol worked for his advantage.... Vote= Daubs peace...oh yeah rtf in diz battle here http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=197822 |
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Voted For: Daubs
all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load ^^^No this was forced an punch wasnt effective crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book ^^^this was good... leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam* ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne ^^^THis was ight.... deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel ^^^Played urkel that was weak.... Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol.. Theorietically speaking.. Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!! ^^^Good Opener Solid punch Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it.. And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet.. ^^^Ight Punch nuthin to special Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers.. & RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears.. ^^^this was a Good Punch wordplay good You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen.. Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician.. ^^^Hot Closer i liked that one... This was an good battle both came wit some good punchs personals an good structure.....but Daubs came wit a stronger verse he consistently dissed macreep wit punchs that werent played.....V/Daubs |
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