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Voted For: Daubs
good shit here.....personals were very good in this battle...my vote goes to daubs for better flow and personals...he also had harder punches.....unfukwidable dont put /'s at the end of ur lines...fucks up the structure...other than that it was cool.... |
Voted For: Daubs
no hate, im cool with both ya'll too, so word up homies thought daubs took this one, unf, ya didn't really have concentrated punches, and by that, i mean focused on daubs.......uh, some were just too random to be effective, like you were just freestyling for kicks infront of a crowd, not really good disses, not bad though, eminem line wasn't bad, just didn't think you kept it consistent....but keep up, ya been elevating pretty good man, word up daubs, not the best from you home boy, but enough....seemed kinda weak, and lacking enthusiam and creativity...tryna get too complex with your wording and concepts, is what it looks like....dont' force shit man, it will only strain the verse.....but not bad, liked the first line and the sig one, good shit......keep up to both v/daubs, rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post2383335 |
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