sleeeeeeeept on

hey yall this was all right but let me drop this little piece up in here

When a girl give up cake in a hot relation its like a state
Of intoxication you drunk off kisses the junk reminisces
Your brain try have sex before she grab the kotex //
Cats post scorn clout with a bad voice
They sound like a worn out sad horse
You don’t sit in saddles during legit battles
Misfits can only rattle microphones you don’t straddle
Funk like I do

good drop drakel....had a sick flow.....good vocab.....nice stucture...good imagery....everything was hott.....i was feelin this 1...rtf...on any in ma sig

good OM drakel. the flow was good but sketchy sometimes. so work on that. your topic was sorta original but dealt with well. u had some good imagery and emotion throughout it. you impressed me on this one, being as its one of the first things ive enjoyed that uve written. good drop. the rhyming was good, sometimes forced but it flowed well. so good job on that also. keep dropping and hit up my OM White Flag.

word, thanks fo-feed

this was a nice drop, i was feelin how yall switch off and on, in the verse. i might have to borrow that in a project im doin. but neway there was plenty of good bars in here so i couldnt really pick a fav one. but yall both came hard wit good flow. even tho it was purple and pink i give it a 9/10 lol. RETURN the favor holla at the sig

Drkale, where you be at son?

yo OSB u gettin another OM done???

attending to my patients yo, have to keep the business up

You should make your new name that. Dr. Kale. Paging Dr. Kale.

do i smell a cheap aqua song rip off?

lmlo....ps, got a new OM idea :evil:

Dreams chasing me, when my presence starts to exist,
Just an untold story of the shark and the fish,

i just realized i love this line

Wasnt bad i liked it keep it homie.....

good flow good vocab and excellent emotion i give it 9/10

Your concept is ok.. Not exactly something that provokes emotion or thought.. It kinda makes me say "Well ain't that some shit? I wonder what's on TV.." Dumb down your language because no one really wants to read that shit.. Haha. Not tryin to shoot you two down, it was pretty good. You had nice flow, and the imagery was well done. Truely, keep droppin'. Peace.