thanks man thats a tko my win

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Voted For: taz

very weak battle...wow umm...

Flow - Taz...the lines were short so the flow sounded better not neccessarily makin it a better verse...nirt was all over the place...sounded alil outa control...work on that

Metaphors - umm... Taz...simply because of his last bar...it was still weak but it was a metaphor...nirt really didnt have any metas at all in his verse...pretty simple...work on that

Punches - wow...tie...all the punches in this battle was weak as hell...that made this battle borin as hell...yall gotta attack the other mc n come hard wit it....dont throw random punches that belong in a open mic verse feel me

Personals - i saw obsolutely NONE !...nuff said

Wordplay - NONE...nirt jus because u put dashes at the end of every punch doesnt make it complex...its still pretty weak n u need come harder wit it...so i wud kill that if i was u but im not so u can do whatever u want

Originality - once again...tie...both nirt and tas had SIMPLEEE verses...no serious vocab no complexity...that killed this battle !

overall - blahh...gotta go wit Taz simple because it flowed better and was an all around SLIGHTLYYYYYY better then nirt's..."your shit bores-man,and rhymning words?,well you sure-can't
cause the only twist i see in your lines comes inside your-pants" ????...that sounded pretty gay 2 me !!!!!!!!

Vote - Taz

weak battle tho...yall can improve alot...no hateon either of yall iight...1

thanks, uppin on this yo........................

uppin yooooooooo

Voted For: taz

V/taz
Taz won it wit his firs and last bars......nirt didnt have really any disses that were appealling.........nirt up on ya disses vocab and such

taz up on ur structure really try and get each word to end at the same spot make it flow better....up on ur multis tooo

but u win this battle no question so u got lucky