Voted For: taz

v/taz

STRUCTURE:both had bad structure not feelin either had good flow....so i got niether on this one!both up on structure make each line end at the same point.

Personals:TAz, had better personals in his verse....Natural killa ur verse was iight but didnt get as much personals as taz in there

PUnches:Taz had better punches in his verse, had great opener and great closer and punches were really solid, natural when u through a punch make sure it lands man......up on ur punches

VOcab-Not much vocab at all....so i cant really say much, both up on vocab to enhance ya verses yo.

Originality:Both really original fresh disses and shit....both had good verses but not great.....

Multis:Natural killa obviuosly had the better multis in this to make his verse ok......didnt help him get the win....taz make sure u have more than 2 lines wit multis next time dont make it look like u dont care..........V/TAZ

thanks man much apprreciated^^still uppin for votes people

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and taz....if ya win this...wat ya say about a 12 line rematch?...I underestimated you here and though you sucked...so i freestyled a verse instead..

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haha.....same thing happened to phreenapdizzle and i took him 5-0 lol.......ill think about the rematch iight.......but ill most likely be down fa sho........UPPIN FOR VOTES YA'LL

Voted For: Natural killa

so doesnt Taz already lose because he went over the line limit? anyway

Taz - first thing i noticed was horrible structure. i couldnt really find the flow cause it was hard to read. you didnt have any real punches or personals. i was disappointed in this verse. no personals no nothing. i would give you a 4/10


Natural killa - much better verse than taz. u had a good personal. well it wasnt that good. but compared to taz's verse it was great. u had a punch in every bar. overall yo basically won with the first bar. i would give you a 7/10

uppin!!!..........let the votes role in yo.........

Voted For: taz

Vote Taz.. u got some good flow and rhymes in.. your structure looks solid especially for writing it so fast.. only thing i didnt like is how ur used same words twice a couple times.. like rhymes.. murder.. and rap.. but overall the flow was better than killas..
killas verse lost me and it looked like he found a rhyming word and wrote anything about it..

vote taz