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Voted For: E.C

Structure-Both had fucked structure but didnt play a key in this battle becuz both was good wit they punches and personals but i felt that sin'cere had better flow than e.c.

Vocab-biggest word in the battle was dalmation lol niether had enhanced vocab in their verse which wasnt a problem both verse still stood strong

Multis-Felt both verses lacked effecting multis....both up on making multis hot in ya verses make sit more enjoyable to read

Personals-I felt e.c had harder hitting fresh personals that got his opponent good, sin'cere had weak personals that didnt quite get the job done in my own eyes

Punches-I feel E.C. had hott punches that hit hard and basically whipped sin'cere into place.....not much more to say....sin'cere next time in ur verse diss ur opponent hard not jabs

Originality-Both verses were pretty hott...but e.c. just came harder in this one, was plain to see ya heard me....sin'cere fell short

v/e.c.

rtf on my battle with an explained honest vote thanks!

Voted For: Sin`cere

i dont even need to try... people look at you and frown,
coz your skills are like stress........they just keep bringing us down,
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decen't concept but i dont like similies
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This guy is too E.C, Ejected Content we see it in ur name
He think he hot on the track when he only burning on a train
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decent punch but a lil basic... still since he does songs its a decent personal.
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then your dalmation line was a simily so i didn't like it that much and your last line was really played... all hot lines are played
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vote here for sin cuz his punches connected more cuz of that personal.
close battle... PLEASE RETURN WITH A VOTE... link in my sig agianst mr. lyricist

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Voted For: Sin`cere

This guy is too E.C, Ejected Content we see it in ur name
He think he hot on the track when he only burning on a train
4....was kinda weak
And the only thing hot in U.K. is at those threats & bomb locations
Cuz u get blast at that spot like E.C was one of the 101 Dalmations
6....good concept...worded a little poor however
And no need for carnations cuz really noone undastands ur ac~cent
Cuz u getting hott is when u lay out in the sun on top of the cement
5...shoulda switched it around so that the act-cent was punch

seriously kid, your steeping wrong, just get the fuck off this board,
you put a prostitute out of business the amount of times you get whored,
3....played.....
it's like i'm snapping your bones i thought you'd give up sonner cuz,
your verses are up in arms................. by the way they humour us,
5...ok...but could have been worded better and added some more complexity
i dont even need to try... people look at you and frown,
coz your skills are like stress........they just keep bringing us down,
4...too basic

Ok..this battle didn't have any spectacular lines at all.I thought E.C had some played lines like the prosititude/whored one and basic ones like the stress one.That middle bar with the humour us coulda have been better with some extra wording.
Both of you need to work on set-ups and making them relevant to the punch.
But I think Sin cere got this for a more creative and compex verse.

Vote-Sin cere
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