uppin this shit............thanks for the feedback

uppin this shit............thanks for the feedback
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uppin this joint real quick....holla at ya boy..................

yo hitchcock were on any otha sites b4 this 1 cuz ya name look familiar like ive seen sum where u been 2 rhyme kings or n e thing else? n e ways nice drop all three versewere nice but i gotta critic bout sumtin when u replied 2 my post lyrical hustla u said i should pick a different theme 2 write about cuzit gettin a lil played but correctif im wrong same concept of this jus a different style rite or wrong either way homie stay up peace hit me back

i aint even going to front that was str8 fire and i aint riding ya dick 4real
all verses was nice as shit
keep coming with it and leave me feedback on mine

heat 4 tha hatas-wiley d(its str8 fir as well)

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yeah son i'll check your joint out, uppin this again.................

This is fire. Every verse was equal too each other really. You guys know what yall are doin. The only thing I can really suggest is that everyone rhymes about what you guys are rhyming about. But im pretty sure you guys hit on deeper more meaningfull topics but for what its worth this was better then a lot of shit other kids tryda spit so props to ya...

Hit this up when you getta chance

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235182

thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................

thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................
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thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................
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thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................
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thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................
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thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................
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thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................
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thanks for the feed son, i'll wit get at you......upppin this ish......................
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