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J.D 08-29-05 08:24 AM

aight thanx for votin newayz. uppin this............

Jay Royal 08-29-05 08:36 AM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

yo lets see....

mic:
u got ok punches but ur flow and structure were kinda bad....some lines were too forced and didnt connect....
ur best:
pm’d me callin me a “cookie”, no I’m a man/
call yourself masculine when you probably tried getting breast implants
2nd line too streched.......but not bad..elevate

6/10

what:ur stucture was kinda gd....something same like i have lol..but for real nice shit..punches could be harder but not bad.....flow..ok......still elevate

ur best lines:
this kid's a 'mermaid', everything he spits is half 'bitch like'
how your throwing fast punches? mic can't even pitch right
nice opener..........gd work man............

7/10


keep elevating both of ya......

J.D 08-30-05 08:25 AM

uppin this..........................................

J.D 08-30-05 02:14 PM

uppin............................................. .

J.D 08-31-05 01:14 PM

uppin this........................................

J.D 08-31-05 05:41 PM

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J.D 09-01-05 06:22 PM

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Crazy Hades 09-02-05 06:13 PM

Voted For: Robert De Niro

One Mic seemed to lack severely...punchlines, personals, wordplay, everything seem to go to Robert. Get it and arrested didn't rhyme, and his verse was only mediocre, but he had some nice lines... one mic just had some basic generic 'i'm better then you' shit and lame crap.

v/ Robert De Niro


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