the fuck do u want memsis?...the main reason y i vote is for peeps to holla bak at mine...and by the way i hardly talk to peeps on msn or aim so you shut up and hop off my clit dude...


still uppin till this is closed....thanx

Voted For: Yvonne

u wudnt be hotter dan a hoe cake even if u were from d oven
bitch,if u dot wanna Tripple like N count ur steps b4 u stolen
3...meh, this didnt really seem that much of a punch to me, wording was all off to.
my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental
4...better than the previous bar, but then still not really that good.
babies break thru ya ego and make u re-arrange yr shit
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
4...meh, just a bit of shit talking right here.
listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect
4...again, more talk talk rather than throwing them punches.

OVERALL: 15/40


Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose
2...meh, :wtf: @ this wack shit, i seen herbs use this style before.
i guess you would get a vote.....if the system ever won
but it's wins stuck at 0 sort of like elevationg from Yvonne(Y-Von)
3...meh, played concept and weak punch.
she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are
2...played concept, and the way you tried to call her homeless was wack.
your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose
3...WOW!!! that was so corny and herb like.

OVERALL: 10/40


weak battle,
both had ass verses really, now either try harder or get better, which ever one of those applies to you......verses need to be more creative and focused on punches, throw in some personals, a bit of wordplay and just get a bit less basic n shit.

V/ - Yvonne

plz RTF in one of my battles, links are in my siggy.

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 

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Voted For: Robert De Niro

u wudnt be hotter dan a hoe cake even if u were from d oven
bitch,if u dot wanna Tripple like N count ur steps b4 u stolen
^^^nice...
my punches make a hole between ur legs to make ut tigh dangle
watch him moan like triny when i knock him off 2 d state of mental
^^^um...played
babies break thru ya ego and make u re-arrange yr shit
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
^^^not really hard hitting here
listen,even if you called urself god u still wunt get respect
cos nobody herre 2 act dramas,its all about lyrical effect
^^^nice closer

Yvonne's at a fork in the road, which way will she choose?
i'd say she'd go right........but she went left just to loose
^^^aight
i guess you would get a vote.....if the system ever won
but it's wins stuck at 0 sort of like elevationg from Yvonne(Y-Von)
^^^nice...
she's from her crib, is that next to a bench and her guitar
i mean come on, your verse described just how whack you are
^^^good punch here
your tung tied, with no spits, i guess she chocked and froze
sorry to break the news..but it's the opposite of dope you compose
^^^not a punch.

I overall think whatever took this with harder punches, not hating or anything.

vote: WhAt EvEr It TaKeS

still uppin............................................. ...........

uppin this shit............................................

Shut the fuck up.

You vote because everybody knows "return the favor" means "vote for me because I voted for you."

On your clit? Lmao. You aren't even CLOSE to my radar.

You've been here since 2004 and you still fucking suck. I have better things to do then to randomly hate on people who I could EASILY tear up in a battle.

You are fucking trash.

live ur fuckin life and let me live mine gimmik....if u think i am still trash then keepit to urself cos nobody asked u for the info...and if u really aint on my clit then y the fuckdou always follow my threads and posts?..even other battles i vote on?...fuckyou bitch....stop following me!!!!!!!!!



upping...

I started voting on Front Lines battle the day I voted on this one.. I was just going down the page. And, the TWO other battles were I voted on.. that you also voted on.. were under the same circumstance. Following you around? LMAO. Uhh.. maybe you forgot, but I was Spastic Lyricist on lyrics.. YOU FOLLOWED ME TO THIS SITE.

Yeah, I know I fucked up bringing such a wack fucking dumbass to the site, but point is.. I was here first.

..and I beat you on lyrics in '04, would you like to accept a battle.. and end up losing to me.. in '05?

6-16 Lines
Normal Rules

I'll set it up.

Fucking respond, motherfucker.

stupid hoe...set it upbut no fucking 16 lines cos i aint got stories to tell-6-10 lines max..and whatever may be the out-come let it be the end of u talking to me...


uppin this

Haha. Get your 5th win and I'll set it up in EFL.

But you could have just said "I don't want to go 16 lines because I'm not good enough to think of that many concepts" and I would have understood.

This was feedback posted for Yvonne
 

If I Culd Vote I'd Vote 4 Dis Yvonne Lady She Had Sum Ok Metaphours!

i reset my text rec scum...and i dont think peeps would have that much patcience to read a tale....but w/e lets do it

Nah, see.. people WANT to read MY verses. They'd probably just skip over your wack peice of shit.

Hurry the fuck up and get your 5th win, though.

^^learn to fuck off my battle.....


uppin....................................