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DQ 08-26-05 08:24 AM

Voted For: Yvonne

Yvonne

like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims
chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game
^nice opener, funny punch 8/10

you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy
you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army)
^nice punch with a personal touch to it, good stuff 7/10

from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity?
i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity
^aight, again a personal touch to it, nice 6/10

dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling
you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin
^wordplay is nice, good punch as well^/b] 7/10

i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted
you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed
[b]^dope closer, finished em off
7/10

Total: 35/50 = 70%


DJ BANANAZ

imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ...
this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs
^uhm no punch in your opener 2/10

cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have
ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood
you could say im dope
^uhm again no punch but decent vocab 4/10

..imma dot ya eye then
imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave
still on her knee's
^coo closer 5/10

Total: 11/30 = 37%

Very one-sided, DJ BANANAZ had no punches whatsoever, Yvonne had a solid battle verse!

criminal 08-26-05 10:29 AM

Voted For: Yvonne

imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ...
this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs
ok

cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have
ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood
dont rhyme

you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then
imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave
still on her knee's

weak verse no punch ya opner was ok N thats it pratices plez







like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims
chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game
decent

you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy
you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army) ok

from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity?
i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity
ha ha

dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling
you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin
ok

i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted
you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed
decent ending and a way better verse in all aspect


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