Upping this again..

Keep voting on this and shit.

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Voted For: Mimesis

mim-some nice stuff, very consistent in the beginning n what not, closer was funny, basically you commanded this battle throughout.imo i think your lines could be shourtened a touch
thats about the only improvement i could say your style/verse needs.... good shit overall....
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unf-im a fan of multi's, but your verse wasnt close to using them effectively, alot of filler that hurt your verse....cuz your setups were basically identical to your punches... with that said, i saw no creativity or decent wordplay throughout..
you were out leveled here yo...pz
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vote/mim, way more consistent with punches throughout the battle

Thanks for the vote and shit.

Upping this.. nah mean?

Upping this again.

Keep voting you gay weiners.

Upping this..

Just somebody fucking vote.

Close this shit out.

Upping this face heads.

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And read the quote in my sig.. ITS ILL.

Upping this.

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Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis had this from the time this battle was set up.. UNF.. i know ur intelligent.. although u get DR's... i think u could be decent on this site... but dude Multi's dont win battles. u had one decent punch.. and it still didnt match mim's worst.. Mim your verse was solid i know u didnt spit ur hardest.. but u really didnt need to.. your flow was on point.. your personals were alrite... your punches was good... i didnt like ur closer.. thats borderline getting played but it was still iight.. i liked your opener.. and the notebook line.. i felt those ones.. they were hitting pretty hard.. soo its clear Mim won this battle... no hate to UNF.. just start using more concept/witty/wordplay in ur lines.. Multi's are nice.. but not in text... they can be used good.. but if used with a punchline.. i'd say if u like using multi's soo much read some of O.M.B's texts battles.. he's not the greatest.. but he knows how to connect multi's with punches.. i think u could eventually get to that point.. u just have to hit text puberty.. and u'll be iight.. soo mim wins on punches personals structure and flow.. no hate.. pz