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Voted For: Deranged
Deranged You Had A More Better Verse Here Man..Punches Was Great..Personals Cool..Wordplay Was Nice Man For Real Inspiration Meh First Bar Was Pretty Decent The Rest Wasn't Good Enough Man Keep It Up Though Vote-Deranged |
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Voted For: Inspiration
AIGHT DawgG is this the battle u told me to vote for u on if its not sorry ima vote for the 1 u asked . |
Voted For: Deranged
~This is an L*F*S* Review- This shit was easy. Inspiration battlin this cat on- pc rippin "quality" into quantities look at this Soft -Femcee watch as he dons-Tities Wack...and didn't make sense just call me out and i bust-raw no "trust invovled” feedin him medecine pills till his guts-dissolve Decent This guy disses women, sayin' they bad, he got no flavor So when a guy D/r's him, it's no wonder he'll return the favor Pretty good Sit down an take some elevation tips from the voters b, You a pussy like when I talk beef you don’t talk back you just block me, What? You all around soft losing 99% of ya battles homie, Your rhymes ar ghost writed both you an ya mans phony, [/b]Huh?[/b] An I aint saying that to be saying it, He aint ever write one damn thang An unlike Bitches homie, In this batle im out of ya range. Wack AND played. Deranged the tape's in effect..his dreams of recordin's stuck..it ain't happenin cuz his pause/paws are tied..no wonder this rookie ain't clappin Decent he done shooked me from rappin.....he sucks be-on(beyond) us all explains why his past is sticky...and i ain't just talkin about his night calls Clever better get the pine-sol..cuz we all know inspiration's about to spit and his shit stain(stayin) on the screen like baby diapers to shit Decent accepted my call-out all hyper and shit cuz you bit...don't lie bitch kinda like a transparent mask on..cuz u ain't gon diss-guys wit it Good. i'll break ur spine with no toll...and u be swingin from the vines n poles & there hasn't even been one vote..yet you already behind the polls Nice. i'll break ur limps and joints so bad your brain'd forget how to even rise & ur shit's wasted/waisted so much... this contest wasn't even tied/thigh Dcent close. OVERALL: This was Deranged easy. We all can see that. He had better punches, better wordplay, better eveything. Period. |
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This was feedback posted for Deranged
checkin polllllzzzzzzzzz homiez.......................
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uppin for fuckin votes............................
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Voted For: Deranged
v/deranged simply becuz his punches were far more hard hitting than his opponent its obviuos to see his structure is better but together and flowed better...i was feeling deranged personals more......inspiration You all around soft losing 99% of ya battles homie, Your rhymes ar ghost writed both you an ya mans phony, ^those kinda lines are played you have to be creative with them.... so v/deranged |
Voted For: Deranged
V/ deranged for not biting... inspiration bit "This guy disses women, sayin' they bad, he got no flavor So when a guy D/r's him, it's no wonder he'll return the favor" from http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206655 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...166&postcount=4 |
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